| "Risky Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: 23kags23 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep writing your story is really great!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ghostly_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 10:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
bfdg
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap! you know...Kagome's friends seem to doubt a lot of what she says. Update a.s.a.p. ^-^
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Reviewed By: hey cool On: August 03, 2004 21:06 CDT
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hehe--as soon as i posted my review about u dudes emailin ur reviews to me....it showed me ALL the reviews!!! yay!!! ^.^ so nvm the whole emailing thing...i will jus have to write quick reviews to read them....u can still email me if u want tho!
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Title: hey pple
Reviewed By: the author of this fic...it wont let me put in my mediaminer name....damn computer.... On: August 03, 2004 21:04 CDT
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hey pple...it looks lyke ive got 4 reviews for this fan fic!! thanx! i love reviews...only one problem....i cant read them...my computer will only let me read the two from Lekara and White Tiger Princess...which is so dumb! I dont kno why it wont let me read my reviews!!! so if u guyz would lyke to write a review, can u plz jus email them to me so i can read them?? ^.^ lol--sry bout this..i will let u all kno when my computer decides to work and u dont have to email ur reviews to me anymore...thanx..and i hope this doesnt discourage u dudez to write reviews!!!! im so sry. i jus dont kno wutz wrong...i think i prolly got a hacker or sumthin...anyhou, thanx a lot...and plz keep reviewing!!!! ^.~
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Reviewed By: SQUEAKERS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 18:37 CDT
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hey i like it write moreits a little slow right now but i know it gonna get good sango needs a tougher vocab and i like sarcasism so dont mind me when i say thats what it needs more of. and aafter this class you should hav s and m have a great big kis. kk? luv ya *MUAH* ciao, bella
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Reviewed By: Some REALLY big Inu Fan On: August 03, 2004 18:07 CDT
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Not bad. Keep it up. I dont know what happened in the second chapter but, a couple of words and the starting quotation marks were missing from a few of the dialogues. But I can still understand it. Keep it up! ~Insane Inu Fan
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its great and interesting but could u change ur writing format, its hard to read the way you have it written. update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Lekara On: July 30, 2004 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good beginning for a fanfic! ^_^ Just be sure to make paragraphs, and try to have more detailed sentances, (but not too much!) Keep up the good work ^_^ - Laura
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