| "Swarm Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Adds to favorites* Oh I love this fic! You've really done a good job with keeping everyone in character, and how they've all got their story to tell! You should really have more reviews for this fic, it's one of the best I've read in a while. I love stories with original characters, it makes the story more interesting. I hope you give Seloli a bigger part in this though, I think you've given her a perfect attitude for a saiyan, and I wanna see how Vegeta acts when he finaly gets a chance to interogate her! Please, please please write the next chapter! I'll be waiting!
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 23:41 CST
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yey u up dated!! great chapter writ more soon!!
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!! this fic is the best!!!! omg ive been lookin for a great fic n thought i wasnt ever gona find a nother one but i did w/ ur fic... im soo in love w/ it!!!!!!!! i cant wait 4 the next chapter!! omg really this fic its really really really really good!!! omg im just so excited that i found a good no great fic lol... i sound lyk a valley girl but dats ok lol.... so please please please plese w/ sprinkles n cherrys on top write more or i'll cry T_T n go nuts lol
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 18:26 CST
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Gald you updated. i've miss quite q few chapter becasue of computer problems. Just glad to see the story still going
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 04:33 CST
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O.o I seem to have miised two chapter update notifications... Eh well, at least I had entertainment while I was drinking my morning coffee... :D Yes, Gohan DID inherit his grandfather's beautiful eyes... I can't recall seeing glasses on Bardo... oh, you meant Ox King, didn't you?? :D And... YAMCHA!!! Ohhhh - you've given the little sweetheart a woman!! :D :D :D My fingers are crossed for him, that it all works out fine, and he gets the happiness he so richly deserves!! :D I do love a fic that treats Yamcha like the man he actually is, rather than the grossly distorted caricature that's seen in so many fics. I'm rather interested to see what Seloli is going to ba a catalyst for... :D Hurry up!! :D
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Reviewed By: the Prince's Jewel On: November 08, 2004 01:36 CST
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Hmm... catalyst? *eyebrows raise* Now, isn't that interesting? And Goten's just discovered her possible whereabouts. *snickers* It's interesting that a love-triangle of sorts seems to be developing. Since S is just a bit player, I guess she won't be taking on one of the boys... so it will be up to you to make someone throroughly miserable (or estatic, depending).
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Reviewed By: Card On: November 05, 2004 11:04 CST
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Chap 1 ...Ack! I don't think that's a belt. If it unwraps itself. Wah! What's happening? Seloli--I love that name
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Rini (Mary-sue writer) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 16:12 CST
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Not bad, the story's turning out really nicely. I'll actually continue reading the story. ^^
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 02:42 CDT
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Interesting. I'm not sure whether I'm more curious to find out where the Saiyans came from, or what's gonna happen with Seloli.
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Title: I'm Loving It!
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! Digging the chapters so far. This is getting good. I love your creativeness (is that spelled right?) Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 06:41 CDT
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Oooooh - the second line of your fic - the flesh and bone line - I have a line very much like that in one I'm currently writing... :| I promise I'm not copying you!! Honest!! *Bats eyelashes* I liked Aspa's line about someone being sent out to deal with Vegeta... :D Half of me keeps mentally screaming at Goku and Vegeta to power up and give them the fright of their lives, the other half of me is applauding them for concealing their power so well. I also loved the image of Goku reluctantly dragging Vegeta away from the other Saiyans... Oh God I want to hug the sweet, adorable little munchkin! I'm wondering how hard Vegeta will be on him when it DOES all come back to bite poor Goku in the rear. Eh, Goku's tough, he can take it. And can I say how much I appreciate you showing affection between Goku and Chichi? :D I like those two a lot. (Well, I like Goku, anyway... :D ) I'm glad my review made you happy - you would have got one sooner, but I'm useless at leaving reviews. And don't worry about my poor Hunny Bunny being dead - it's just as well. He's a cantankerous old git at the best of times... :D Well, looking forward to the next chapter, and I won't really spork you - good things are always worth the wait... :D
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 06:31 CDT
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Ooooh, I'm hooked. Good, original story - makes a nice change from all the other rather formulaic ones that litter ff. I like the way the focus was on Marron fighting at the begining. It's a welcome change to see her as something more than a foil for one of the younger senshi. Not that I object to the poor girl having a nice, strong boyfreind - it's just that the way you've portrayed her gives her more depth than other stories. I like the idea of her fighting, it always struck me as odd that a girl with her parents didn't fight. I also welcomed the other Saiyans - it's nice to see more of the trouble-making little beasts... :D One thing I didn't get is whether the entire race are still alive, or just a little pocket of them escaped destruction. That's probably me though - my children are nagging me, so my concentration is poor at the moment. I should have left off reviewing until I'd had a chance to re-read when I could fully concentrate - but I saw your note at the end of ch 3 and wanted to give you some encouragement. Since MM's problems last year, readership and reviews have dropped dramamtically. I know it's easier said than done, but don't let it discourage you. I really like the way you've set this up, and can't wait to see how it all pans out, and I LOVED the line, 'Piccolo stopped pretending to ignore the conversation'! So him!! :D I've added this to my faves so I don't miss out on any updates... so come on, get cracking - I have sporks, and I'm not afraid to use them |
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this so far. I hope you add to it. three chapters.......i need mor! (i'm one to talk!)I love creative stories instead of the traditonal same character ones. I love the added punch to this one. I'm excited to see where this is going. Keep me posted. Majin.........
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 21:07 CDT
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Kale appears during some of the flashbacks in the Freeza Saga and I think he may make a quick cameo during the Bardock movie. King Vegeta killed him because he was the bearer of bad news about Freeza...I'm not sure which episode he appears in though
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 16:07 CDT
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Awww...make me blush! I'm a Vegeta-whore so it doesn't bother me who he's with cuz I can just imagine the other person bein' me! XD I'm am beyond pathetic...I know...leeme 'lone. How old is Seloli anyways? She doesn't sound older than her late teens but maybe I'm just reading stuff wrong. Update soon!
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