| "Detention" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 18:56 CST
Comment/Review:
That was hott. Needs a sequel to me.
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Reviewed By: Lady Shellstar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
o.o That was pretty naughty...BUT I DAMN-WELL LIKED IT ANYWAYS!!! WOOT!!!!
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Title: luiousmiko
Reviewed By: Inu-temptress On: March 30, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!That was something new.I thought it was wild{thats in a good way}!I think it would be cool to have another meeting.Just this time...plez,try and make it longer!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
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Reviewed By: Voni On: November 18, 2004 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
This was good, but I agree with "Hunny Luv".. it needed more.
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Reviewed By: hunny luv On: August 27, 2004 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the subject of this fiction but it would have been bettr if it was more than jsut oral sex and fondling.
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Reviewed By: DarkDragonFireSprit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
MY BRIAN CAN"T TAKE SEEING THAT GOD SAVE ME SHOT ME NOW HELP HELP acutally very well writin very good weird but good.
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint ( ) On: July 30, 2004 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol thats a pairing i woulda never imagined! haha kagura is soo strict! i love the fan thing. its very fitting...=]
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
i only have one word for that one......wow..... where did that one come from!!!!! that was a good story!!!! hope u write more!!!!!!!
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