| "Kagome's Realization" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: sadaboxter83 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 21:32 CST
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please update again ive been waiting forever
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first of all, my condolenses to you for your grandmother. I realize that I'm a couple years late, but I hadn't known about your story until you just recently updated it. I know that losing a loved one can be very tough. Also, congratulations on quitting smoking! Hope you can keep it up! Anyways, on to the actual review. Your story is very intriguing, and original. I'd not personally made the connection between Beauty and the Beast and Inuyasha. Kudos for realizing that. The story has some nice angst to it, I particularly liked how you did Kagome's death. Additionally, I'm rather curious as to see what all is going to happen nwo that she's come back. And just a personal note, I've got this odd feeling about that dog, "sneaks". I've just got this suspicion he'll end up playing a bigger role. Or perhaps I'm reading too much into it... There's only one thing that bothered me at times. That is the spelling. It improved much as the chapters went on, but in the beginning it was quite distracting to read with a lot of errors. Although as I stated, it got considerably better in later chapters. One other thing that miffed me was that chapter one is missing. If possible, could you repost it? Right now, it simply jumps right into chapter 2. Oh, and I've got to say, the chapter where Inuyasha gives Kagome a massage was absolutely perfectly set up. I mean, you did a perfect job of misdirecting the reader into assuming they were having sex, especially with the way the last chapter ended. I just wanted to say, you did an excellent job with that. I hope you continue the story, its well done. I like the story line, the original character was nicely done, and there's still a lot of loose ends.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 04:13 CDT
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What a wonderful story! So glad you updated, or I would never have known about it. Love the growing relationship b/t K and IY. Now if only Sango and Miroku would wise up, eh? Have you kept up with the manga? Seems like you're tying into it a little. Anxiously awaiting your next update!
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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 05:10 CDT
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i'm a new one to your fan reviews...srry to here about your grandma .~_~. you have my condolences. n e way...i wanted to give my appreciations to u for such a great story and in hopes that u will continue it soon! i'm quite shocked to see such an amazing story with such little reviews! none-the-less this story is marvelous, and i hope u update soon!ttfn! peace
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That is a beutiful story. I am sorry for your loss, and I hope that things go well. Update if you can, when you can please?
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Title: so sad
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love your fic i feel so sad for you cause of your grandmother and how you kept up your spirits through alll of it we alll love you and want you to be happy shes not suffering anymore if she was suffering i dont know we all love you much love [?[K.r.i.s.s.y]?]
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Reviewed By: Inez On: September 17, 2005 02:50 CDT
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im sorry,i think this was a while ago and i just found this fic,my dad had a bad surgery and was in a coma for 4 months,but hes better now,and i just want to tell you to stay strong.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha so far away [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the last chapter, it was really creative, i will be looking forward to the next one
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Title: :'(
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 23, 2004 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that must be harsh, life ain't looking up to me either, I hope there is someone who can help you through this. You don't sound like the kind of person who should have to lose someone like this.-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: Inu_4_Eva On: November 23, 2004 18:34 CST
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I understand what you are going through....my gdad past away because of lung cancer a couple monthes ago...you can take your time updating, we understand.....don't leave hanging us forever though...
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: November 23, 2004 05:24 CST
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Don't worry about updating your story if your g-ma needs you! We can wait, but don't abandon us forever! Happy writing, and give your g-ma our love for inspiring you to write~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: November 22, 2004 22:47 CST
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oh, i'm so sorry. *huggles*
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever (nli so I want to be called Inu_4_Eva since it is easier) On: November 07, 2004 17:30 CST
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It is simply slendid. At the beggining of that last chapte I was having thoughts like Miroku, but then I was thinking 'this is a pg-13 story...get your mind out of the gutter! I bet the author means something diff like a massage....yep its a massage!!! lmao! wow I read to many story's' great fic
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Reviewed By: alimm On: November 06, 2004 08:43 CST
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This is a wonderful story I just found it. I love all that is posted so far. I do want to point out one tiny thing..... the last chapter Inuyasha was giving Kagome a "massage" NOT a "message" I know what you meant but since those two words mean something totally different someone else may not. Anyway keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: beccajo On: November 03, 2004 21:12 CST
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Omg! words can not comprehend how many emotions and thoughts are swirling around me because of this story! It is so deep i and so pasionate i'm almost at loss for words.....I cried uncontrolably when kagome was killed and the emotions Inuyasha let out that my eye's stung but i couldn't tare myself away from it. No matter how much i tried to just take a break i couldn't...i even tryied to watch beauty and the beast and i see now that that wasn't a smart idea. i hope u can contiune soon at the moment it's not a crushing cliff hanger but if i leave the story sit too long i know that i'm cry all over again when you add on. ...in short: I love it!!!
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