| "The Thin Line" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mrs Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 01:45 CST
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Oh my kami, please update, i love your story soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. My love for it is as long as a billion light years. (Pretty long ne) love it love it love it. Hmm wonder why they never do meetings between anime and do with disney channel. What's up with tttttttttaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhTTTTTTT!!!!!! Update or else i'll slit yo throat.
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 03:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*JUMPS UP AND DOWN HESTERICLY!* GET BACK TO WORK, I WANT AN UPDATE NOW!!!! THIS IS A GOOD STORY, ADN I WANT TO READ IT NOW!!!! ^~^
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 14:20 CDT
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Easy DV...so thats why You havent been online...yeiks, and DD has somthing to tell you as soon as you get back...and frankily so do i ^^;;; i hope you recover every thing
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: April 12, 2005 21:53 CDT
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OMG this is a great story i love it and i can't wait to see what happends next so update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Title: WOOOOWWWWW!!!!!
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's one good story you got going on there!!! keep it up!!! *^_^*
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Reviewed By: Silver Shadow On: February 22, 2005 11:32 CST
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Ah well i tried (about youko being senshi's mate-to-be) this chaper was great! and i like how you had the ageing thing all screwy in Mienaikai. speaking of which what does that mean anyway? o i can't wait for everyone to meet! youko's reaction to what senshi's been through and what kagome is will be priceless! ah well update soon. Ja ne!
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Title: not really a review.. but oh well
Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 23:38 CST
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*sweatdrop*.. it wont let me post the rest of my review.. so.. REVIEW PART II: i got totally hooked onto fuchigi yugi and fullmetal alchemist!! YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WATCH THEM! theyre great! cept.. the manga and anime of fullmetal are WAAAY different >
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Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 23:36 CST
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omg you didnt update since FOREVER!! @.@ so how you been? not dead or anything? ^.^'' i got BIRDIES!! not as good as kitties, but close enough ne? >
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 15:21 CST
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I like it a lot so far. You're a very good author. Senshi rocks!!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 23:14 CST
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Review! There! I'm glad you thought it was cute- he took all my excess cash for manga... T_T I'm glad you finally updated! Everytime I read the Inuyasha manga now, I keep thinking, 'Senshi could fit in here...' Which is odd. In a weird sort of way. I mean, I think it would be awesome if Kagome was a Schiozophrenic human with Shippo's mom living in her mind... Heh. Er, I think Senshi's awesome! There! That's right. *nods superiorly* update soon! Kurama and Kagome haven't met yet, so you need to hasten, or not... I just wanna see Youko's reaction to seeing Senshi, and Senshi's reaction to seeing Youko.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: February 20, 2005 22:16 CST
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great chapter!!! what are the pairs again?? when do Kurama and Kagome/Senshi meet? what about the meeting? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: DD On: February 20, 2005 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, it's fine if I don't start in the commentary yet. Anywho, for a little help, the people I enjoy torturing the most are Ganko and Furyou. he he he.....*strokes Mr.Happy-chan* Better get a mop..... Update soon, DV!!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 18:59 CST
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hehe, why did DD use MY screen name??? oh well whats done is done... good chappie
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: February 20, 2005 18:21 CST
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Ahh! Marvelous! Fantastic! I'm actually liking this BETTER than kagome no kitsune! I can't wait for the groups to meet, and I hope there's a lot said to Koemna about his lack of trial for the poor fox! Update soon! This is excellent...
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 20, 2005 17:32 CST
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but it's always calm before the storm.
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Reviewed By: Silver Shadow On: January 28, 2005 09:43 CST
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underappreciated my ass! you can take as long as you want to have the groups meet. i loved this chapter. and why do i have this nagging feeling in the back of my mind that her mate-to-be was youko? ah well - wonderful as always DV! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! DD here! NOT Raven! I like this story. You only had a few spelling errors, which is more than I can say for Raven's fics. *dives into the shadow realm to protect herself from the angry volcano kitsune that is spending the night at her house* So anypay, please update soon! And if you feel like it, you can put me in the commentary before each chapter! (Just to let you know, I find it quite amusing to torture Furyou and Ganko. Hint hint. Nudge nudge.) Ja matte ne! --DD--
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 17:30 CST
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Raven:awww, how kiwaii, who woulda thought Sinshi(sp) was royalty, i bet the light minipulater(starts with a p cant remembr right off) put 2 and 2 togeather when she said her name, and i guessing Youko-Kun is royalty that ran aswell Koto: Rave, whats with you and solving misteries??? Furyou: yeah its getting anoying
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Title: The story so far...
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 17:34 CST
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I LOVED this story so far!!! I'm a new YYH fan - but I have been an Inuyasha fan for about two years now. I love the commentary between everyone! You're a wonderful author, and I love your style of writing!! ^___^ Sara
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 00:26 CST
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DV... just to let you know... I'm bringing in Kouga to express all the fan's gratitude for you being such a wonderful author-ess! Kouga: "DV, you may not be Kagome, but these people are pa-" *Kouga disappears and scuffling sounds are heard before Kurama is sent out* Kurama: "Eh? DV... They are trying to say how much they appreciate you for all your hard work and effort this past year!" *Kurama disappears and muffled conversation goes on... something about 'treasure'...* RF101: Eh? Where'd they get the idea I'm paying them? I'm broke... Heh, they were expressing their gratitude for being mercilessly manipulated from the bottom of their greedy hearts! *walks off muttering something about being broke, Kurama walks away with a contented smirk on his face, Kouga's no where to be seen...* O.o There, my Christmas present to you, brief inspiration. Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 00:17 CST
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I've only seen screenshots of the game... But everyone is cute... is it okay to hate you for owning it? Wasn't my hint ever so subtle? XD LOL. I liked this chapter! It was fantastic! Bravo! Cheers! ...and no, I haven't drinken any egg-nog this holiday season... I noticed a few spelling errors here and there... and a few lines that didn't really make sense. Just to make sure that my eyes aren't playing tricks on me(dumb sugarplums keep obscuring my vision) you should go through your chapter again... Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: Baka KitsuneBri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 12:08 CST
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great fanfic!! update soon!! & 1 question, whats Sango's type of youkai called again? & what exactly is it, as in whats the powers it has?
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Reviewed By: Storywriter10791 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 02:26 CST
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This is great! I hope you update it reallyr eally really soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: November 09, 2004 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i mean... wow!! i'm usually wary of reading any crossovers that have kagome turn into a kitsune, but the way you're making her an avatar like youko and having them have history, PLUS having her be involved in creating the barriers.... kami, wow!! update soon!! i can't wait for more and wanna know how the "meeting" is gonna go in the future!!
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Reviewed By: Silver Shadow On: November 09, 2004 15:19 CST
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Once again, and most likely forever considering how abosolutely wonderful all your stories are, this chapter was increadible!!! n the fourth relm sound cool i can just see koenma's reaction about it now....lol please update again soon! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 04, 2004 15:23 CST
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interesting... A fourth realm that isn't know to even the Reikai Tantei....
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 14:55 CST
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Ah... So that's what a coutesan is... what weird people. What's going to happen to everyone else? Is shippo going to the fourth realm? Or... waitasecond... is the fourth realm a top-secret place or something? I guess I'll just have to wait for you to update and find out won't I?
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: November 04, 2004 08:38 CST
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SWEET! update more soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 20:56 CST
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Raven:*snicker* poor Kagome she really wants to know. Koto: Raven want some popcoren this could take a while*waches Kagome chase DV around the set* Raven: AWWW thank you Furyou: ooops sorry Raven, i forgot you cant have any popcorn you still have your braces on Raven: WHY YOU, GET YOUR TAILS BACK HERE* hits furyou and koto on the head with the good ol trusty malet grabbs popcorn bole and starts eating* oh BTW DV you can use the mallet when ever any of the charicters or muses get out of line, except Yusuke*glomps Yusuke plushie*
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 22:24 CDT
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Ah... I think I know now... about how they meet that is... What is a courtesan anyways? I feel totally idiotic... but I'm with Shippo on this... aren't they the weird people who worship the king/queen/ruling person? Continue with the great story! *gives this story ten thumbs up but runs out of thumbs at two*
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