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Reviewed By: Silver Shadow On: October 17, 2004 20:08 CDT
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*LONG pause* Are you some kind of goddess of writing or something? This was increadble!!! Is it too bold as to say that Youko and Senshi had small crushes on each other? Well please update when your life isn't so crazy or as soon as you can without losing any remaining sanity to stress whichever comes first. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well talk about a cliffie... I hope that you are able to update soon because I am really enjoying this fic. Good luck and tty next time! ^.~
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 23:28 CDT
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i know two reviews in a row but i just ralized somthing... you used almost every singlr synnanim(sp) for Prostiute, save for lot lizerd(trucker talk for a whore that sloisites herself in truck stops, what my uncle is a trucker), whore, slut, hoe, solisiter(sp),and conqubine(and they used that word in a disny movie, Mulan). i think thats all.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 21:21 CDT
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great chapter. when do Kurama and Kagome meet? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 20:58 CDT
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Me:hey i drew a few more picts for two/three storys, a solo pict os Sango with her katana, Ganko and kirishi, and another which i am not going to tell you about till you get the pict, although i accendentaly made Ganko a latino on accdent i sware, the pincle graphite mixed with the pin when i was inking it in, and now i cant erase it and he looks like he has a mustash, and a mexican. i think you would like the last pict i drew for you, BUT i am going to e-mail them to you this weekend (if i dont have a hangover form the spiked punch at homecoming. last year they spiked it with VODKA) goog chappie by the way a look into Youko's head, and he dosent want to admit it, but a certian silver has a crush. Furyou:can i have Kouga? PALEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE Koto:calm down mutt, he has Ayame. Furyou:I am NOT A MUTT YOU STUPID BAKA, i am half fire apperition, half wolf, neah. Me and Koto: stupid and baka mean practicly the same thing Me: l8r DV
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:04 CDT
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please update soon, changed my kitsune call name to Koto(and no not after the kitsune on YYH, i cant stand her) l8r
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 05:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... YAY! I'm happy, and I really like your story. How will Kurama/Youko and Kagome/Senshi meet? WE may never know... ah well... 'Till next time! Ja!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: September 04, 2004 12:45 CDT
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sweet! that chapter was fantastic!! when are Kurama/Youko and Kagome/Senshi going to meet? update more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 08:53 CDT
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mahahahahah!!! i loved that!! evilness evilnesss!!!! and much love never forget the love!!! maha! this is goin to b great!! so plz update soon!!!! kurama!!! is a mamas boy kurama is a mamas boy!!!
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Reviewed By: kireishi On: September 04, 2004 03:19 CDT
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oh i hope u have a btter day.. and of course, school naturally sucks. update soon! ^-^ and the cat is officially gone.. T.T
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 03, 2004 21:06 CDT
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oh dear, this isn't good...
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Reviewed By: skyfox (nli) On: September 03, 2004 16:23 CDT
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fucushu...fucushu... what the hell does that mean! im going to go look that up now! thanx for updateing! now please do more of that os so loved updating so i can know wth fucushu means!!!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 14:50 CDT
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*sigh* when will yusuke learn to expect the unexpected? good chapter, and lemie guess who the next POV is gonna be... kurama we have to see his inlight on this new development. and one Question... is Kagome related to any one from the YuYu group? like kewibaka or Yusuke i know its cliché but still though the yusuke is overused, but yuo never see kag related to the baka. l8r Kirei, the volcano kitsune =^-^=
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 12:53 CDT
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DV can u please up date soon, i may be a volcano kitsune(basically a veasion of your mountan kitsune only live on volcanic mountans and likes to "play" with fox Fire) i can get alittle impatent, im follow ing your other Inu/YYH stories on FF.net under the same name. i also have a one shot song fict that may intrset you called Strawberry wine. if you want to read it. l8r Foxylilraven
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 20:54 CDT
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It's really cool! I love how you weave in Youko slightly and add little parts, and Senshi seems really, like a good OC (not something I say often). She's not invincible and she's well, not a Mary Sue for one (kill them.... ruin stories they do). Any how, this is definitely a favorites, and there's just a bit of spelling errors in the first chapter (or was that another fic? Faulty memory......hehehe *sheepish smile*)
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