| "The Thin Line" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 20:54 CDT
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It's really cool! I love how you weave in Youko slightly and add little parts, and Senshi seems really, like a good OC (not something I say often). She's not invincible and she's well, not a Mary Sue for one (kill them.... ruin stories they do). Any how, this is definitely a favorites, and there's just a bit of spelling errors in the first chapter (or was that another fic? Faulty memory......hehehe *sheepish smile*)
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Title: you are evil
Reviewed By: Heavenly Demon On: August 11, 2004 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are EVIL! Shame on you ending with a cliffy ::glare:: BUT it is a well written fic so you better update soon cappesh. ::imitates the god father:: Or I might have to make you an offer you can't refuse. ::clears throte:: Yeah thats all I have to say. G`night
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: August 11, 2004 22:18 CDT
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great new chapter!!! when are you introducing Kurama?? and is this a Kag/Kur/Senshi fic?? update soon!
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Title: hii
Reviewed By: kireishi On: August 11, 2004 19:41 CDT
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!! an update! i got new sn so im me there k? its halluci shrooms. ^^' so ne who, i love chappie! and i cant wait for kurama to show up!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 19:35 CDT
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yet another great chappy! thoguh no evil cliffy! it was great! i can not wait for when kagome comes to and when kurama shows up! that will truelly b something to read! any way! much love never forget the love!! and is kouga coming back? he better b!! i love kouga! *hugs kouga plushie* plz udpate soon!
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Reviewed By: kuramasgal* On: August 11, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 15:51 CDT
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good so far but whens yyh group gonna show up? l8r
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 10:55 CDT
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that was a really really mean place to stop!!! so plz plz plz!! update soon!! i really want to no what happens next!! i love this story!!! it is the best!! much love never forget the love!! plz udpate!!!!
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Title: kireishi-chan here!
Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 07:31 CDT
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OH GOD NO!! U CANT LEAVE IT THERE!! NOT AFTER THE CLIFFIE I JUST READ IN FIGHT FOR THY HEART!! AND ON THE FIRST CHAPTER TOO!! ISNT THAT A BIT MUCH?!!? WHY?!?! ok..calm down..calm down.. ^-^ i hope u update story soon! this is an EVIL place to put it! T.T Btw, what kind of kitsune is Senshi? -.- my mm.org email thingy isnt working! damn it!
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Title: the thin line
Reviewed By: kagime is foever On: August 02, 2004 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD KEEP GOING
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 22:21 CDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! its a horrible cliffy!!!!! the apocalipse is near!!!! its the end of the world!!!!!! ^__^ exaggerating is fun! anywayz, update extremely soon!^__~
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 18:05 CDT
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whats Kurama hiding?? and what happens next?? update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:10 CDT
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please up date your story Fight For Thy Heart soon, and good start on this story. though next time mention what kind of kitsune kags alterment personality is, you kinda forgot to mention that. l8r
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zhare [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. As far as I know, this plot of yours is very original. I really like this story as well as "Kagome no Kitsune", which I still need to finish reading. I have already added this story to my favorites; that way I will know right away when you update it. As good as this story is, I noticed a few spelling and grammer errors. What you really need is a beta reader to go over it and fix these mistakes. I would be happy to beta read any of your stories for you, just e-mail me at Zhare_z@yahoo.com and let me know if you are interested. I also have something to say to Chiisai: It is never a good idea to kill the author of a good fic, even when they leave cliffhangers like that one. Instead of someone killing them, someone should kidnap them, tie them to a chair in front of a computer, and make them finish the story. ^_^ Well, that is all for now. Ja ne. ~Zhare~
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