| "TYLC Months 1 and 2" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: here's another review 4 u
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really good. my character isn't acting ooc, i mean, noone would want to be caught spying right? besides he despises inuyasha for what he did (the real inuyasha not naraku,my OC knows their seperate aura's) keep up the really good work and update soon. p.s. plz do the alien attack,i want to show off my powers. shane.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great....sorry for not reviewing sooner
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Reviewed By: P-Y-G On: August 08, 2004 18:24 CDT
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Really great! Thanks for mentioning Sahar more!
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Reviewed By: Matthew-kun On: August 08, 2004 12:56 CDT
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Hey great job so far, and you're doing great with the OC's. Keep it up!!! It's getting better and better!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh2414 On: August 08, 2004 08:22 CDT
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Your writing rocks! I love how you can tell exsactly how my OC will act in these situations! ^^ It's great! Pleae update again soon! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 03:34 CDT
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LOL!!! Even if it really looks painfull, that was sooooo funny! Poor Hee-chan! Protecting a girl he probably just now noticed cuz he rammed into her, and brake more bones! Hopefully he isn't that hurt! Your right, it was funny, and the way you put it, so painfull! Dude, I can't wait for the new update! Now that he's met her, he'll probably bump into her alot more times, literally! LOL, can't wait for more and update soon! ^^
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Title: good work
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is reallllly good ^__^ i really like my character, i especially liked the part where you wrote: "shane and inuyasha were glaring at eachother harshly...oh the tension." that was funny. keep up the good work. shane.
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Reviewed By: Matthew-kun On: August 07, 2004 18:08 CDT
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Hey this is coming along nicely well!!! Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 21:41 CDT
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I love how you update so fast, yet keep the story rolling along! Your plot is extreamly original! I also like how you have the romances (Sp?) moving along nicely! Please update soon! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail(logged off) On: August 06, 2004 21:38 CDT
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YOUR THE BEST!!! You got Abigail's sugar high personality done SO RIGHT I WAS LAUGING AT MYSELF!! PRETTY PLEAZEY UPDATEY SOONY, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE HAPPY AND FUN TIME!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 21:36 CDT
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Yayness! Yet again, you've protrayed Kayori's personality quite well! Hehe...your really good! You always know I give you the best of luck with your stories, so...GOOD LUCK!!! Ooh...I really can't wait for Heero to start noticing Kayori though...LOL, that'll be pretty funny for the perfect klutz attack! Second doubts from Heero? I HOPE NOT!!! Well, can't wait for the new chapter! Yet again...GOOD LUCK!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: xXMidori-ChanXx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: P-Y-G On: August 05, 2004 10:53 CDT
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The story is really great so far! But you don't mention Sahar that much.
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 09:14 CDT
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Good Luck! Though I don't see why you would need it! Your story rocks already! Thanks for updating soo fast! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 02:00 CDT
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Oh, that was nice, being caged up in a volcano that seems that it could erupt any second now...well, Kayori's happy to have cotton candy! Sweet new chapter as usual! Love it all and I can't wait for the new chapter! ^^ Laterz, much!
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