| "TYLC Months 1 and 2" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:42 CDT
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lol that was funny!update soon!
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Reviewed By: Vanessa. C On: August 03, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen! My computer was broken last week and I didn't even know you updated, until now. Sorry, I didn't mean to take so long to R/R. ^^; Anyway, your story is very good. I read every chapter, and to say the least I really enjoyed it. I'm really impressed. O.O I can't believe Inuyasha would try to get a shark by himself. He's lost it. Then again, that is something Inuyasha would do, wouldn't it? I gotta go read the story again because it was quite funny and well written. Good luck on your writing! ^^
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Reviewed By: Matthew-kun On: August 03, 2004 13:34 CDT
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This is very good!!! I like it!!! Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 08:24 CDT
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Good Luck with writing the next chapter!! ^^ This one was really good! I'm glad no one on the team got really hurt! I also like how you keep everyone so in character! I would have exspected Inuyasha to do just that! Please update ASAP! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 02:21 CDT
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o.0 Kayori the Cox Rooster? How creative...I can already imagen all the funny things that I can do in a Rooster outfit! ^^ I'm going to fall off laughing as we speak! GREAT new update and I simply can't wait for more! ^^ LOL, I can also picture Relena in a SD version of Deathscythe! LOL!! Laterz, much! ^^
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter
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Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 19:45 CDT
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LOL, Shark Fishing, how fun! ^^ Pretty clever though, I admit, I can't wait for the next stuff! ^^
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 19:16 CDT
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Ooo!! Shark Catching! Sounds exsiting! I hope that my OC won't be needed too much, considering she is the Nurse! (I wouldn't want to see the rest of the team beat up by the sharks! Thanks for updating so fast! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ Update soon!I want to see what happens.So plz update soon!thx
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 08:20 CDT
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Wow! It's so indepth! I love how you include everyones different points of view!! I don't think that my Oc was too OOC! It was perfect! Thanks for updating so fast!! Can't wait for the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter!PLz update soon.I really want to see want happens^^
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Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 18:50 CDT
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Yellow! Kayori's a mascot? Well, I'm just as confused as her but I THINK I know why! ^^ Since she's ALWAYS happy and really good at cheering, I guess? Hehe...great new chapter and I can't wait for the new one! ^^
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 08:48 CDT
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That was great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Yayness!
Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Just got the notice and so far, your doing really good! ^^ Your doing great with Kayori's personality and her klutzy-ness! Hehe...5 stars! Well, can't wait for the new update and if your need help, I can help! ^^ Laterz, much! PS: Finally an author who does paragraphs whenever someone speaks! Yayness! ^^
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Great so far!PLz update soon.I want to see what happens^^
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