| "Bath time" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: swordgirl_amy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, oh my God, I just loved it!!! Please please please do a squal with all the boys together! It would be the best lemon ever!! All the pretty boys getting it on, not to mention all the kinky wonders that would be happening...So do a pervert and sick minder girl a favor and write a squal to this delishus story with a big pertty boy orgy!! -Amy-
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Reviewed By: Haiiro no Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was seriously hot. Please write more stories, similar to this one.
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Reviewed By: Sakura Harusame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequel!! Plz? *chibi puppy eyes* This was great! I read it before it was revised, and I loved it then, but now I love it more!
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! No words can descride how great this story is.
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Title: HHOOOTTT!!!
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading this very hot story,I only have one thing to say. WRITE THE DAMN SEQUEL!!!!! I loved this story so much, loved the use of toys even more and I would really enjoy it if you wrote a sequel!!! Like, the orgy that Quatre Trowa and Wufei were suggesting! That would be hot beyond belief!! Please please please do!!
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
ROTFFLMAO!!!! WOW!! that was soo funny and HOTT!! u have some skills. i can tell ya that. but who new duo could be that horny!! lol..yeah well all and all luv it added to my favorites. it's really kool man so keep up the good work! ^_^
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