| "Night Life" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 00:48 CDT
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This story was really good. The plot had me interested the entire way through. The only thing I would say is maybe try some dividers when you change scene cause it got a little confusing at points. And check over your spelling and grammar. But awesome fic none the less.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 16, 2005 16:57 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 02:41 CST
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Ok... I finally finished this uber long fic of doom! And contrary o what I thought in the first three chapters the plot line turned out to be fairly good. Although I do have a lot of problems with your grammar, so you may want to get that fixed up... I am rather busy these days but if you send it to me I would be happy to proof read it for you... Trust me when I tell you that I am only offering to do this because I really liked this plot line... Other than that I only usually BETA in the summer time. Well good work for what it was worth and contact me if you are interested.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 15:38 CDT
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hey that was a great story. i already hated karasue(sp?). it was very well thought out. id like to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an excellent story! i just spent about 2 hrs reading it, and enjoyed everyminute! will there be a sequel? i hope so!!!!! please make one! -fox
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