| "On Love and Lust - And Their Resultant Disasters" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
Title: Holy hell that was good!
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS THE BEST DEMON DIARY LEMON I HAVE EVER SEEN! Hell it may even be the best lemon I have ever seen. I am so very happy to welcome a talented author such as yourself to my favourites!
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Title: ...speechless...
Reviewed By: Carmen LaVihta On: August 27, 2005 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yey,Raenef+Eclipse action!!Woohoo!!First Demon Diary I have read and here is my opinion:Loved it!!I really enjoyed reading this fanfic!!It was well written and interesting and...well,it was just the kind of a story I like to read. Me=perv. No,just kidding,but still I found this fanfic very nice...^_^
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Title: ...speechless...
Reviewed By: Carmen LaVihta On: August 27, 2005 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yey,Raenef+Eclipse action!!Woohoo!!First Demon Diary I have read and here is my opinion:Loved it!!I really enjoyed reading this fanfic!!It was well written and interesting and...well,it was just the kind of a story I like to read. Me=perv. No,just kidding,but still I found this very fanfic very nice...^_^
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Title: Too HOT!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: nikkio3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the hottest fic. i have ever read, i was looking for demon diary doujinshi or yaoi everywhere then found this site :-) God is this story HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Grim Spectre of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ummm...I love you. That's all...
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Reviewed By: Niongi On: June 06, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it i cant wait for the rest, thank you so much this is just what i hoped for
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Title: RedHedLvr
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish there was an 11 or even a 12 on the rating scale! Maybe even a 20. I loved the style you set up here. Rather formal and impeccably corret, kinda like Eclipse himself. This was fantastic. He's so sweet and gentle with his young lord, barely keeping his demon self from taking control, but still hot stuff for sure. I see you have a few other stories going and can't wait for you finish them too. Wow! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Nue_Ehr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant. It was so detailed and well thought-through. I applaud you!
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good. I found my self holding meh breath! eheheh. yay for Eclipse~! I'm going to look for more Raenef and Eclipse pairngs, you got me hooked on them!
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Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 19:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I actually had to look away from the screen once because it was just too good!
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Reviewed By: Count D [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME. Best Demon Diary fic I've read damn near! Speachles, speachles. I have no more words ^ ^.
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Title: Oh...my...
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* Sweet gods above that was.... amazing. I can't believe how sucked into the last chapter I got. It's so... intense with emotion and such, it's really a beautiful piece to read. You added just the right amount of strength and weakness to the characters to make them all the more believable and true to form. I love it X) You've defiantly made my morning so MAJOR kudos to you!
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh.....my....FUCKING GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! I need new shorts.... Jesus, Mary, and Joseph.... That was so beautiful....and hot...and unBELIEVABLY SEXY!!! Raenef...and Eclipse... I will fully admit I'm a huge perv and an even bigger sucker for the deflowering of an innocent. But you had them both PERFECT! Eclipse...trying so desperately to hold back with Raenef demanding eveything and nothing less. Eclipse....dear lord... in the bathroom....WHY CAN'T I HAVE A PIECE OF THAT IN MY LIFE?!?!?!?!? God, so wonderful and growling is so sexy, so is utter unconditional surrender of both parties. This story brought tears to my eyes at the sheer beauty of the moment. And I also love how you remain in character so well. Eclipse, ever the worry-wart, with right to worry mind, continuing his less than perfectly happy thoughts as Raenef falls asleep in his arms. And Raenef, so sweetly, hotly, virginaly, sexy was wonderful. I LOVE a combination shy but determined uke. He knows what he wants but he doesn't know how to get it so he asks. That is a man's wet dream there, add two GORGEOUS men and it's a woman's wet dream. hee hee hee. I'm sorry, I'm rambling but seriously this is the absolute BEST Demon Diary fanfic I have ever read and I hope to see more of your work soon. I'm adding you to my favorites list, no doubt about it. I would really like you to expand on some of Eclipse's fears, maybe make them more realistic, a sequel or just more fics in general would be MOST appreciated. Lovingly HDA
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Title: o.o
Reviewed By: Shoko(Child of Ice) On: September 11, 2004 03:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow... RaeRae likes it -rough-! That was damned good! One of the better lemons I've read! And just the fact that Eclipse was... growling... wow...
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Reviewed By: Ardwynna_m [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 04:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn, but that's the hottest thing I've read in a while, so hot, so much passion, so much longing and cleverly written as well.
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Reviewed By: Obsessive Kawaii Gurl On: September 01, 2004 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god that was really really good
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: happybunnygod666999 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first of all yeeeeehaaaaaaaw i love it! ok i give you a millian points for evrything! i think it's the best one o'v read. well e-mail me. i would like to co write a storywith you witch would be fun well i will w mail you when i can. i love ur story. stay brilliant.
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Title: OH MY GOD oh my god oh my god oh my god...
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! This is such a great fanfic! You have a beautiful way of writing and that was such a good story. Please write more Raenef/Eclipse lemons.
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Reviewed By: The Random Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 09:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay. I give you like, a gazillion points for all those ratings above because that had to be THE BEST lemon I've EVER read in my ENTIRE life. And I've read a lot. It made me feel all happy inside . . . so beautiful . . . good job! I loved it!
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