| "Heart of the Totetsu" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Matsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry I can't spell. On a happier note I really do like your story and hope you continue it soon.
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Title: Continue soon...
Reviewed By: Matsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a bad place to end *glare*. I hate cliffies. On a happier not I really do like your story and home you continue it soon. '_~
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Reviewed By: Zillah On: August 05, 2004 15:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I hope you continue this. there is such a lack of good PSOH fics out there, and this one seems interesting. Well, I'll be checking back for updates!
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Shiugre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. You might want to use the roll that everything someone talk tyou make a new paragraph just something I learned in english class not sure if its true, but it makes it easier for me to read stories. Aside from that I loved it. Great Idea. T-chan is one of my favorite minor characters of all time!
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