| "Androgyny" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you don't play. Oh my goodness that Epligue rocked. (Funny, I've never used that word before.) I hope you write a sequel to this, it was so hot. The descriptions were mind boggling. You did a really great job here and I hope you do write a sequal, it's to good to end like this.
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Reviewed By: one-winged-shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 19:19 CDT
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hehe Youji's a bar keeper... lol while trying to picture Aya sulking... yeah this is very good fic. 1x2 is the hottest pairing EVER!!... my favorite Weiss is actually AyaxOmi which despite contrary beliefs works quite well... *goes back to reading fic, good fic...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 04:26 CDT
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*smiles* I agree, snickers it was a bit light in the beginning and basically screamed 'boys gonna screw' with the litany of that wonderful song in the background. Well Duo and Quat being muses kind of explains why they could have sex without prep and lube. But will it always be that way? when will the job of the muses be more than just job? They will be together with their charges but won't they want to grow old with them, would they be able to go on without them? can they get hurt? The two them aren't normal muses, they're surreal and all can see them, so won't Tro and Hee-chan claim to them be challenged?! Between them is what they feel called love or will only be the desire, attraction, lust that drew them together? *snickers* well that last q can be ignored because both couples are talking about being together long term however doubts and unforeseen circumstances are sometimes a constant!? Oi, I talk to much. i look forward to your arc of this story line.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 26, 2004 19:25 CDT
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Not bad! Not bad at all! I think I will like to continue reading this arc. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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Title: laughs***
Reviewed By: priscel--- On: August 19, 2004 16:03 CDT
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*beams and thinks back to Author's comments at the end of chapter 3* I can't wait to read other stuff by u. in fact I think i'll go peek to see some of them. *big grin* Yes Epilogue all things shall be concluded...
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting so far, a slightly different take on the usual 'meet in a club go home and screw each other blind' situation. Aside from the odd spelling and grammar error (which we're all guilty of!) it flows very well and I'd be interested to see more of it. Thanks for sharing. :)
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 19:54 CDT
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*smiles* I like! I love the song too, its been a while since I've heard it! Thank you, good build up and boy soon a lemon... Hey update soon!
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Title: LOVE YA!
Reviewed By: Darling Imoto On: August 03, 2004 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Oh please, I desperately want to see the sequel and yummy lemons that are to come...hee hee hee...I made a funny. Write more soon!
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Title: Good story!
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is interesant start and good story. I hope you will add new chapter soon.
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