| "Love is Killing" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Cairyn Sandstrom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like it, really, but, well, I don't wanna be mean, but I'd like to give some tips: - shorter sentences make it easier to read. - try the spellcheck from word, I use it too. One last question, which country do you come from?
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Reviewed By: Kat_315 On: August 19, 2004 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
some spelling problems other wise it's fine and the story seems to be very interesting.... plz up date soon...
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Reviewed By: Jinx Saru On: August 02, 2004 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool story. Tyson and Max are sooo cute together! I like the story and idea and all, but your spelling sucks. Sorry if that sounded mean! Do you have any type of spell check at all? ^o^ sorry to bug you 'bout it!
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Reviewed By: G.K On: August 01, 2004 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. Looks like a very good story in the making & could you do something with rei & kai in the kitchen when you get to a lemon part? Can't wait for the next part.
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