| ""Kikyo Fic" (title subject to change)" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: June 04, 2009 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay but I think you should rewrite it and make it better
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 08:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gawd, I haven't read this in years! xD (A-sama/Aibou here. I believe I saw myself adressed as such in the notes. =P) You're right, it is awful now LOL! But why have you not posted the rest of it? D= You were just getting to the good parts, dammit! *smites you* Do you even still have the notebook? xD
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Reviewed By: NekoCeles [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isn't this an interesting fanfic? Very creative with the whole Kikyou getting pregnant with Inuyasha's child after raping him... then reviving herself unexpectedly. : )
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Title: Jealous much?
Reviewed By: RG On: April 16, 2005 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! I loved this story! I thought it was pretty original, but I have seen Inuyasha raped but not from Kikyou... I liked how Inuyasha marked Kagome... heh, and I thought it was cute that she bit him back... LOL! Well done though! You forgot some letters in words sometimes but I didn't really notice! I enjoyed that song Kagome sang for Inuyasha... it was very sweet and well chosen... Your blood and guts scene was awesome! I thought your description was great. It wasn't long winded but it urges the reader (Me!) to read faster… I like that in a fic! LOL! Yeah, Inuyasha would complain about bloodstains wouldn't he... heh! You've done a great job! Keep up the great work! Watcher, RG
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: TwinBladeZero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 17:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I am impressed! Not only did you have a great story, you also are one of the very few who spelled Tetsusiaga right! I also have an idea for the title "Revenge of the Evil, Psychotic, Undead Bitch" you have to admit, that does suit Kikyo. *snicker* Keep it up! ^_^
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Title: nifty
Reviewed By: Shinsei Shinja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was good. will there be more? if so, please update soon. i'd like to read more.
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Reviewed By: Littleme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like :)
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was good !! update soon !
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Title: loven it
Reviewed By: amma On: August 10, 2004 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love the pretty baby song i cant belive it its just sooo sooo perfect for the part i was alittle upset at the whole kikyou thing though she always ruins everything please dont attack me people who like kikyou she just has the wort timeing in the histery alla historys
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Title: Pretty good.
Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For something written a long time ago, this was pretty damn good! The lemon was good, definately worth an "R" rating... good work, keep it up! Oh yeah, about your fighting scene, i admit i've read better ones but that was still from on a scale from 1-10, with 10 being the best, it was worth a... 7, well made but nothing special. This is just a suggestion but... if you want to see my version of a fight scene, check out my fic "Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past" And if you want to read two very *HOT* lemons :) check out my other two fics "Silver Winds of Passion" and "Loneliness of the Free Wind"... I apologise if you're offended for asking something like that, i am just asking. Anyway, keep writing this one, it has promise and potential!
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Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: August 02, 2004 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good for something that was written long ago. I enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: JadeFighter On: August 01, 2004 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this was so awesome i hope ur gonna update soon this story was SO cute and i hope to see more of your work newho laters and peace JadeFighter
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