| "A Simple Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: Dark reality [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awesome(first word to pop in to my head) it draws me in and makes want to read more. such pain and sorrow, it makes you feel sad and tear up! i love how you tell us what trunks is thinking and how you intensify the emotions felt. keep up the awesome work and continue writing this emotional story of struggling with drug abuse and the deaths of loved ones.
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you've started this story. I love how you've portrayed Vegeta, still strong and arrogant but calmer(due to years of forced experience I'm sure). And I love Gohan's role as mentor. I can't wait to read more, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tenshica On: November 22, 2004 06:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story is very well-written. I love seeing things from an angsty Trunks' POV and you're doing marvellously with that perspective. Hopefully, you'll post more soon?
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Reviewed By: Jewel On: August 25, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
know what, i'd have to agree with Yuikey, this story is great, and you need to update very soon!
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: August 10, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor trucks! I hope Vegeta can help him!! this story is great please update soon!!!
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