| "Harmony" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: snow_angel12687 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
One of my favorite SasukexNaruto fics. You're one of my favorite authors.
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Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful idea, and very cleverly written. Cute, too, I might add... ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 01:20 CST
Comment/Review:
lol...i LOVED that it was great Iloved that line "so that's why you were acting weird..."LOL taht was GREAT..THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice lemon
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Reviewed By: Kikirini [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"So that's why you were acting weird! You were horny~!" Haha, I loved that part. The lemon was good. Sasuke was MAJORLY OOC in this though... I mean, I can tell that he was supposed to be, but this was all a little bit extreme. Also, in the beginning, I think it would've helped if you had incorperated Sasuke's infatuation with Naruto into a sort of storyline, BEGINNING to the fic, instead of just explaining it. It began off kind of dull because of that. Otherwise, great fic.
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