Title: ok now may I know what is this?
Reviewed By: Darkstalker X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... may I know, what the hell is this story? just to know, is this your first fanfic? cause it better be for such a mediocre story, i admit my first fanfic wasnt that good we can say, but at least you should correct your grammar and seems you dont understand the english perfectly, may i recommend you study more english so you can know how to spell the verb? or maybe try to ask for some help for improving just like I did, I was helped by all that could lead me a hand and I rewrote my stories and became a better fanfic writter with a better sense and knowledge to write better plots, not flaming your story, just to recommend you that you should think a bit more on the plot and the spelling,you can look over your work again and again to see that you can improve, just study it, and learn more about your fanfics. Darkstalker X out
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