| "A Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I feel so special! being your only reviewer! I read this chapter at FF.net silly elf! UPDATE PLEASE! and ha! I won Hiei and my verbal war! Muahahahaha!
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 06:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very weird...a wall collapsing on Hiei... o_O Is the MVOON Whiplash? Baby go BOOM! lol The family situation is fine by me. Update!
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't go Bwahahaha! on me, sister! Argh! Kill Natasha! Kill...I thought Larien had violet eyes. You changed my eye color how could you? *fake cries* I'm a forbidden child... interesting... He keeps the gem hidden stupid! God! That mysterious voice better not be me stupid. Update Lia! XP
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya sis! Sorry I couldn't review earlier. My computer was being mean to me... AGAIN! T_T I need a can of Pepsi... lol. Write the second chapter! I already read this at your house! Baka elf... NO! Not your not really sharp sword that can kill me if you stab me very hard! *runs away* Save me, Hiei! Hiei: Iie. Why should I? I'm being tortured by a deranged onna. Me: *stops running* Well, you do have a point... *sees you come after me again* The Queen of Caffeine will live! *runs to the hills* Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!
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