| "Black heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Kiranta On: March 09, 2005 00:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I know I posted on AFF.net, but I had to do it here. These kind of stories with Naraku portrayed as a good guy instead of a vile bastard like he is on the show is one of my favorites. But doing a original fic set in the anime with him & Sango just won't work. Naraku had her family and village killed and is using her brother like a puppet, I don't think Sango will be too thrilled to be his mate. But AU's on the other hand...
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Reviewed By: llxsunsetxll [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god this was a great story i hope that u write more for this story.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
naraku and rin?!?! wow, that's one hell of a unique couple! not to mention one hell of a lemon! and kanna being the freaky girl *laughs* too true. anyway, good job! if i could i'd make that originality rating a 1000...naraku and rin?!?! i've actually been waiting for someone to write that pairnig...write more of 'em please!
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