| "Clearly in Denial" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: HWSFGVDV On: April 09, 2005 02:03 CDT
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lov the strory BUT IVE BEEENNNNNN WAITING 2 FREAKIN LONG
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Reviewed By: justagirl On: April 07, 2005 23:13 CDT
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Hey!Your story is really intrigueing. I really love how you write. In fact its one of the best techniques i've seen in media minor....Maybe i need to read more storys...Maybe you just have major talent...i can't deside. Its just that i see that type of writing (you use) in top selling authors. Well keep up the good work. (oh, but you need to go over the grammar and spelling...thats it)PLEASE UP DATE SOOOOON! Get off your lazy butt! (im just saying that cause you said it)....:)
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 03:04 CST
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Well I can say to much since you aren't to into the plot yet but your idea certainly seems interiging and the story is rather good so far. I think thatif your story continues this way it will shine with the greatness it holds now. I wasn't really looking for errors but one did stick out in my mind. The 2nd from the last paragraph you forgot the apstrophe in she'd. The 2nd sentence, that talks about her training. I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 23:51 CST
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HEY!! great start for your story!! please update soon. i wonder whats going to happen next? well keep up the great work. ViciousVamp
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