| "The New Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: unimportant bystander#12 On: September 21, 2004 15:25 CDT
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I loved it as always!^_^What's up with the rude waiter?Elaine{my yami}:Well wouldn't you be kind of rude to a guy who only tips you a cent?Me:I guess so.Anyways please update really really soon!
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Reviewed By: unimportant bystander#12 On: August 21, 2004 14:42 CDT
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YAY ANOTHER UPDATE!I thought that chapter was good,Just like all the others!^__________^Update soon!
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Reviewed By: unimportant bystander#12 On: August 08, 2004 15:30 CDT
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Update soon!
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Title: good start
Reviewed By: Deep Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I read the first two chapters and they were pretty good. I don't know to much about Yu-gi-oh but it was still interesting. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: unimportant bystander#12 On: August 05, 2004 16:31 CDT
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What's going to happen to ryou?Is there going to be a love triangle I hope so those are fun.congrats on two more great chappies update soon.later!
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Reviewed By: unimportant bystander#12 On: August 04, 2004 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!
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Title: Hey! It's me!
Reviewed By: Tigeress_Demon_Girl On: August 03, 2004 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey gurl! You told me to write a review so I am. Great story and at least you can put the arguments in! lol! Well, update soon or I will sic a power hungry Malik on you until you do! lol! I'm just joking with ya! Or am I? Heh, heh, heh. Seto: You're crazy! Subaru: Hey, I may be crazy but ur the one standing here without any pants on! Seto: *looks down* AH! *runs off down the street with only his boxers on* Subaru: Well...that's a uh...interesting sight...I'll end my rant here...*hear cop sirens* Luv ya! Ja ne!
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