| "Sex Stadium: A Robin/Starfire/BB/Raven Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good scratch that great I've never read anything like that. Yeah I say after they go to bed Cyborg wakes up and first questions the mess and then a giant and I mean huge dragon comes up from the unknown and eats him then that's the end. Okay I am scared Im watching what ever and I heard an adult use no problamo it was scary anyway Love yah! :)
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Reviewed By: damien black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have one with Cyborg as a pimp and have him fuck raven, terra, bumblebee, starfire, jinx, and blackfire (not at the same time though). Either that or have a cyborg/jinx lemon. Other than that, good work.
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Title: I award you with the Bill Goldberg "BLARGH!!!" of approval! *winks*
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit, you have a talent in writing lemons. I really wish that you would do a Raven/Starfire lemon (and kill Robin, but hey, that's just my personal opinion). Other than that, your fanfics are really good. Hope to see a new one sometime in the future!
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Reviewed By: SilentDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfics HSA2! Please write more BBxRae fics.
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Title: Midori InuOokami
Reviewed By: Midori InuOokami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Liked your fanfic. You must really like to write lemons. Literally! Anyway keep up the good work. Until next time, Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: bonekhan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 14:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't ever do Cyborg. Make a fic where he dies.... please. Good lemon though. Nice style of writing. Good Creativity. You've given some inspiration man, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: mackattack On: August 18, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great lemon by HSA2! sorry it took me so long to read it I went on vacation and didn't see it till I got back. so just thought I'd let ya know that I've liked all these stories that you have done very good I can't wait till the next one! l8er!
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Reviewed By: HSA2 On: August 08, 2004 08:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was supposed to be funny dude, plus I'm not doing Cyborg. Ever
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Reviewed By: Someonestupid111 On: August 08, 2004 07:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, don't be mean to Cyborg. Let him have some action. Like he has a secret, where a like compartment opens up in his crotch area to reveal a dick. Or sumthin. >.>
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Reviewed By: Someonestupid111 On: August 08, 2004 07:11 CDT
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Man, don't be mean to Cyborg. Let him have some action. Like he has a secret, where a like compartment opens up in his crotch area to reveal a dick. Or sumthin. >.>
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Reviewed By: HyperSonicAdam2 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 22:06 CDT
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don;t worry, you can expect that
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Reviewed By: esmtse On: August 05, 2004 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
if you do a yuri, let robin get in on the action
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