| "To Be Loved." Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 13:44 CST
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did you give up on the story?.. i hope you havent, and decide to update soon.
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Reviewed By: Genkaimaster [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 13:18 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great work. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 20:38 CDT
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it's good. update soon. But I think it would be better if you would start talking in past tense form. you're always sayings stuff like: 'Yusuke looks at Koenma'. or 'Yusuke says'. And I think it would be better to talk in past tense form. For example: 'Yusuke said to Koenma'. or 'Said Yusuke'. Do you see what I mean?. Good story though. ^__^.
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Title: To Be Loved.
Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon plz! I really like this story.
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Reviewed By: Peril879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 18:41 CDT
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Please update! I love it! I mostly loved Koenma's story about the psychic demon and the fire demon! It was so romantic! Lol, sorry I'm getting mushy again. Please, please, please update!
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Reviewed By: angel of death and life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update
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Title: COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HIEIYOUKOKURAMALUVER24 On: August 04, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT IS VERY GOOD SO FAR LIKE YOUR CHOICE OF WHICH KIND DEMON THE READER SHOULD BE. HIEI:HN! ME:BE NICE HIEI OR ON SWEET SNOW! HIEI:SWEET SNOW? WHERE?! ME&HIEI:UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuhime6666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 10:27 CDT
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NOOOOO!!!!!....please please update soon...it was getting really really good. Ja ne! X__x
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Reviewed By: Mirikia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 16:38 CDT
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your grammar is better than almost everyone i know!!!! ('cept me, no offense...) and i luv ur story, u gotta continue!!!
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Reviewed By: fallen wings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 09:49 CDT
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update soon!
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