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| "The Two Thingies of DOOM" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Shitaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fact that I was laughing all through the story should elaborate why I gave it a Ten. Hahah...man, this was pretty funny..
| Title: Better.
Reviewed By: Blue Dragon X [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This scored higher than the previous, its an improvement, cross apply the good points. I read what you said about me and my parents in your bio at ff.net . . . ouch.
| Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Blue Dragon X [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Chapter 4) About as good as the others, of course there were things I could do without, but I mentioned them. So far this story is actually pretty funny. When I read further chapters, I hope to see you expand on the parodies a bit, they're my favorites.
| Reviewed By: Blue Dragon X [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Chapter 3) I gave high points in the originality, here. I liked the parody you did with that part from The Two Towers (and the innuendo, as well). Also, Knuckles resposne was pretty funny about what I think was his hair. Nice job on that.
| Title: Oh . . .
Reviewed By: Blue Dragon X [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. I think I'll rate different chapters individually. If I said anything negative about this story in the past, I know why, but I ain't here to start off with the bad points. Alright, I personally could have done with less long screams, but they didn't impede. The Eggman conversation was pretty funny, and the end of that chapter (running in completely different directions). This seems like a fairly good read, so far.
| Title: Hmm . . .
Reviewed By: Blue Dragon X [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is I, Blue Dragon X. As much as I hate to admit it, this is a pretty funny story. You also went out of your way to pay attention to correctness, the humor hs somewhat of a structure. Regardless of my orientation to format, I still like it, I'll continue reviewing this. For the record . . . I didn't report any of your fics.
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