"Paradise In Your Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: inukagluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 21:51 CDT Comment/Review: are there going to be any lemons??? sorry if i am acting like miroku, but i actually like reading inuyasha and kagome lemons*blush blush blush*
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Reviewed By: inukagluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 21:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i loved it soooooooo much!!!!! it was soo great even if it was only 2 cahppies long!!!!! i also totally agree with you!!! Kikyo should die and stay dead, that way inuyasha and kagome can be together!!!!!! i thought i was the only one who thought that kikyo was a horrible, cruel, son of a bitch*gomen-nasai(i am sorry for swearing!)*, but it is sooooo true!!!!!!!!!!! all of my cousins love kikyo, heck- my little sis worships her!!!!!!!! i totally hate her though!!!!!! i love inuyasha and kagome together though!!!! they are such a cute couple!!! the greatest anime couple of all time actually( and manga)!!!!!!!!!! i really enjoyed this fanfic!!! and if some of my spelling is wrong please excuse me!!!! i suck at spelling fast!!!! -inukagluva
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Title: awwww Reviewed By: that one chick On: September 12, 2004 01:26 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is awsome..i cant wait till the next chapter....are there going to be any lemons in any of the rest of the story? (just askin)
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Reviewed By: HPangel589 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 13:41 CDT Comment/Review: hey I love this u should really finish it...NOW!
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Title: i dunno Reviewed By: Yessi On: August 06, 2004 23:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: :::Does a Break Dance::: i thought that chapter was very good !!!!!!!!!!!!! ::does break dance on top of kikyo:::: hey inuyasha and kagome 2gether very kool keep it up!!!!!!! If u haven't notice yes i am a kikyo hater her name makes me boil in madness to kill!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyways go go shorty its ur b-day keep the work up!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: HPangel589 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 13:49 CDT Comment/Review: Hey guys! what's up? well this was the first fanfiction I've written and it really wasn't that popular as my other story Broken Vow so I haven't worked on this for a while but I do Have 4 chapters for u guys so u can enjoy them while I work my ass off on Bv
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Reviewed By: meow*mixers On: August 05, 2004 01:07 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story! well, maybe that's cuz, I hate kikyo, anyways, please write more!! :P
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Title: Hi! Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:40 CDT Comment/Review: This is a really good fic, but I think you need to make the chapters longer. Ja ne!
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