| "Just a Good Screw" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: DG On: January 11, 2005 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh your story sucked all right but.. in a good way if you get my meaning ~_^ The only thing I didn't like was the speech paterns of the characters seemed a bit odd, and there were a few grammar and puntuation errors. But that's nothing that a good beta-reader couldn't fix! ^^ Carry on ^^
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Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 09:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
The did not suck it was AWESOME!!!! i loved the ending!! they are getting marryed^^
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: August 27, 2004 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good and I look forward to reading more of what u have to write.What i really liked about this was how nich Dee was to Ryo and how with the whole teasing thing went.I thought is was one of your best lemons yet.It was very well done and u r getting much better in the your style of writing.Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Yukino Maxwell On: August 27, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good work. It is much better then when u first started.U have improved a great deal sience u started writing and u continue to even in your newer work. Godd job and keep up the good work.I'm sure a few readers of your work want to know r u going to add anything to this? One last thing that u still have to work on the grammer and spelling.With the seplling its just that u forget to add a letter thus confusing the reader.thats all bye.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the details of this story
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Reviewed By: Big Sis On: August 21, 2004 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it too. p.s. I'll finish dragon fighters when I finish mended hearts
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Title: firgodes7
Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there. It is me again. I really enjoyed this story. Your detailing was really good for this story. I wonder will you be writing more for this story? Hope to see you keep writing.
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