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| "Cyberian Winter" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Umazak [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not gonna be as nice as the last guy but I will warn you.This is a bad reveiw.Now granted you had the same things happen that I've dreamed of,you were horrible.You didn't even get close to Lain's personality.You either need the shy girl or the in your face girl.Granted she was high half the time but Lain wouldn't do those things.She's too carring.Now I apologize for this comment but I just had to get it off my chest before I went crazy because S.E. Lain is my all time favorite anime so be careful with it when I'm near.But I have to admit,your writing style was good and all but I beleive you defiled the name of Lain.,which is also my name.
| Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, but I have to give a bad review here. First, the positive. Your writing style is solid. The concept, thin as it is, works well enough. Problem is, the ideas and characters presented within "Lain" don't exactly lend themselves well to a lemon. I can get behind the drug use angle, myself, personally, but, again, it just clashes here with these characters. You just don't seem to have Lain's personally down. Ah, whatever, you wanted to write a lemon for all the series, so you probabily weren't to worried about that stuff. Err, sorry. I don't dig it. It's just, Lain is a favorite of mine, so I'm kinda' touchy feeling concerning it. I'm trying to be as kind about this as posible. Sorry, I didn't like it, but don't let that stop you. My opinion is only one of what I'm sure is many. Is this long-winded? Err, casual drug users of the world unite!
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