Reviewed By: Kuro Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 08:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is starting out good, but you should seriously add more stuff to this chapter, it's too short. If this sounds like some sort of flame, I'm very sorry if it does. But I assure you, I am not sending you a flame. Flamers should be shot! *BAAAAAAAAANGGGGGGGGGGG!!! lol. Well please update soon, I'm curious to see where this is going.
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