| "Time Traveler Meets Spirit Detective" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: Annaku On: March 16, 2005 19:44 CST
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your story is good an its not mouving to fast eather. do you plan on updating at all??
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really good. Nothing is moving to fast so that's goog. You had a lot of grammatical errors in one of the chapters so try and check that. You kept on forgetting the quotations.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: January 22, 2005 12:39 CST
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poor Shippo...update more soon!
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 19:27 CST
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Great story, I really love it and I hope that you keep updating. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. The stories just really awesome, keep posting it.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: January 19, 2005 15:41 CST
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Inu-kun already has a leash. Not that it's done him much good.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 23:38 CST
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she's got a temper...
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: November 23, 2004 16:54 CST
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*laughs some more* OH YEAH! THEY'RE FIGHTIN' SOME MORE! YOU JUST GOTTA LOVE THOSE SCENES! *continues laughing* Hmm, I wonder how Kagome will react when Botan talks to her! *grins really big* Please update soon! Buh-bye for now! *looks around for Kirara* Hmm, where'd she go? *runs off looking for her*
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Title: Its an awesome story!
Reviewed By: Sarah-Chan On: November 23, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(ignore the last one i thought I was logged in)Keep up the good work! If you don't I'll be forced to kill you. ^__^; I'm better now... anyways, I give it an 11 out of 10!
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Reviewed By: Its an awesome story! On: November 23, 2004 15:59 CST
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Keep up the good work! If you don't I'll be forced to kill you. ^__^; I'm better now... anyways, I give it an 11 out of 10!
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Reviewed By: aru-inu On: November 23, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! when are you going to put up a new chapter? what trouble does inuyasha and yusuke get into? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 19:20 CST
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Well the chapter is really awesome. Since you have the whole thing written, how many more chapters does this story happen to be? Also I can't wait for the talk between Botan and Kagome where they talk about Yusuke. Hopefully it will be a good one. I hope that you can update the story again soon because I really love the story. Keep writing/posting.
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Reviewed By: Demonangel90 (not signed in...again) On: November 22, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Angel: THIS IS GREAT! GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT! Keep posting! This story is getting good! Demon: Don't embarress yourself anymore than you already have Angel. You know drinking seven cups of coffee does this to you. Please don't do it again. Angel: YA YA! JUST KEEP WRITING THE STORY!!!!
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 00:12 CST
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Wow, I had thought that you had given up on this story. I really love it, I'm so glad that you decided to update it finally. I hope that you continue writing the story. This is definately one of my favorites. I also hope that there is going to be some more Kagome and Yusuke action coming up soon. Keep writing, I hope you update soon, this is awesome.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: November 21, 2004 23:11 CST
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great fun! update more soon!
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: November 20, 2004 21:32 CST
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Hooray! You finally updated! *laughs like a maniac* InuYasha's jealous! THey're fightin' over her, well, mostly glaring. Can't wait for the 'sit' though! Please update soon! Buh-bye for now!
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