| "Time Traveler Meets Spirit Detective" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: August 15, 2004 14:45 CDT
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lol!!! what happens between Shippo and Kurama? update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: allin656 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really cool chapter, I hope that you keep writing because I really like this story. I can't wait for the next update.
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 03:08 CDT
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ooh you just have to update this, actually Yuske and Kagome pairings are rare I think since Ive only read not even a handfull of them, but this seems to work, you are writing it well and make it work well so I hope you continue and hope to see an update soon I really like this fic, your doing an awsome job at it, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: August 13, 2004 20:32 CDT
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cool, I look forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: kagome_rules [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 18:28 CDT
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me likey story me likey story me want more me want more funny funny funny. i can just imagine inuyasha crushing 2 the ground and everybody laughing at such a simple word
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Reviewed By: Mimi082008 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's veery funny! Update soon^^
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 (not signed in) On: August 11, 2004 19:37 CDT
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this is off to an awesome start it is sooo funny your doing great
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: August 10, 2004 19:36 CDT
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LMAO! I wonder about Hiei's reaction to that.... and to her in general. What's going on with Kikyo? Betcha Kag'll say sit at one point whilst talking to inu. But it's your story so I shouldn't bet agaiunst you...
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 17:53 CDT
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great start!!! what happens after she said SIT??? update soon plz!!!
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Reviewed By: Erika M On: August 10, 2004 12:09 CDT
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Update soon as possible please. You left off at a very bad timing. It was just starting to get good. By the by I love your story. Huggles from Phoxy~
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: August 10, 2004 09:58 CDT
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*laughing like crazy* HE WAS SAT IN FRONT OF YUSUKE AND HIS FRIENDS! IMAGINE HOW MUCH YUSUKE WILL BE TEASING AND LAUGHING AT HIM! *continues laughing* PLEASE UPDATE SOON! *continues laughing* BUH-BYE FOR NOW! *continues laughing* CAN'T! *laughing* BREATHE! *laughing* NEED! *laughing* AIR!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: August 09, 2004 19:52 CDT
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LOLL! What's a spirit detective I'm really falling into this fic it's so interesting...
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Reviewed By: AnimeAngel20 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i lov ur fic..plz.plz,plz update soon...
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: August 09, 2004 09:16 CDT
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Thanks anyway! I'll try to go there when I can! Now, we have a situation! That was very funny! But, who said the question? Kagome or Shippo. Hmm...well please update soon! Buh-bye for now!
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Reviewed By: white miko On: August 09, 2004 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far keep writing many more chapters please and soon have a lemon or lime scene with kagome and yusuke.UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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