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| "Wolf's Rain Insanity" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 12:44 CST
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This story is so hilarious!!! The idea for the next chapter is that you can have Kiba, Tsume, Toboe and Hige watch music videos on BET(that's the channel they show R&B and rap videos) and Blue stays in the kitchen far away from Hige. Darcia and Harmona make out since they are husband/wife. Then you take the gang to the mall to go shopping. Kiba can go to the Flower Shop to smell flowers, Tsume goes to a clothing store that has alot of leather, Hige goes to Victoria's Secret, Toboe wanders around, Blue and Harmona goes to Macey's to get some clothes and Darcia also wonders in the mall. Well, that's my idea for the next chapter. I wish I was in this story so I can give Tsume a big hug!!! Continue!!!
| Reviewed By: xXdArKn3sSxWitHinXx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 22:07 CDT
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hey i like your story! its so kawaiii! i wish i was in that house too! it would be so kewl! hehehe! write more please! -Rynna
| Title: Awwww
Reviewed By: Kaja On: August 07, 2004 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so funny, and so cuuuute!Awwwwwww.I love it! Write more,please?!You are the funniest writer ive encountered in a while!
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