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| "In Dreams - Interlude" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Aruka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never usually give a perfect score in fics, but for enjoyment, this certainly did wake my senses. I've read the "In Dreams" fic on Fanfiction(dot)net, and I liked it. Though it kinda left me hanging when you didn't post a sensual chapter after the final chappie. This is by far, erotic, sensual and eye friendly Hentai fic. Kudos for you! ~Aruka
| Title: yeah, I'm 'that' elianthos...
Reviewed By: elianthos On: January 29, 2006 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't noticed grammar/spelling mistakes (not that I'm the best judge about it, either ;) *Italian-born speaker, remember?*). Your style of writing is just one of my favs, and this piece is no exception. Brava! Enjoyment factor above... well, your writing was very ... effective *fans herself*. And you must have been enjoying yourself writing it too. It shows!
| Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read the first apart and almost killed someone when I thought that THAT was the ending but then I found out you had another chapter. YAY! Gosh I love lemons...Yummyness.
| Reviewed By: ebonyfox-not logged in On: April 17, 2005 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was interesting, considering it was an interlude. It was enough, shy almost like a budding lover.
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