| "Bathing Suit" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was really good, i enjoyed reading it...please continue to write :)
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Reviewed By: Elfen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Sniffling Aya! Very sweet and kawaii. I liked the idea of the bathingsuit being something from *before* everything happened. Nice touch! Well-written.
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