| "The One-Eared Neko" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Title: HEyyy wahooo
Reviewed By: priscel *blinks* On: October 19, 2004 09:29 CDT
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OH MAN!!! He kissed and I can't believe that Heero really didn't know!! please I had hoped that his response would be better!!! I knew that Relena's father was responsible for the extermination of the Nekos that consequently turned out to be Duo's family, just by her behavior and words '"My father is going to get rid off them. He's a good leader, and because of him we'll all be safe to let our children play outside again."' Calling Neekos 'things' they are living breathing beings with intelligence gosh... and think this all happen in America?! You've touched on and revealed the truth that the so called 'American' public often does to anyone different than they are, they react with hatred to difference and demean their intelligence because of this. Now this does not mean all Americans do this 'cuz i'm one ya know, The America of the people would reflect the multitude of difference that lives in this country but it doesn't.. *sigh* I think i'm heading toward a justice rant and an explanation of the blant descriminatory/prejudice/feign ignorance that lies with people of power. So I'll stop there and say wonderful JOB!!! I love it and I SOOO knew that Duo kissed Heero a bit harder to distract him from the needle. SO he's going to try to reason with Peacecraft and hopefully he won't have to whip out his gun to defend himself... but I don't think he needs it. He's a very skilled individual. AND OH PLEASE say that he won't die?! That heero'll help him when he comes too. more please! |
Reviewed By: priscel *grins* On: October 15, 2004 17:24 CDT
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The story at hand: Go Heero!! I knew that it wasn't a problem that he couldn't shoot, I think it was something about ethics maybe?! I was sooo thinking Heero would kiss Duo, they were soo close! but Heero has yet to come to terms with his attraction to Duo and I think his realization of Duo's almost inhuman strength as he put it suggests that Heero doesn't really think him as not human, maybe he considers Nekos as humans?? Author's words: hmm no school spirit! Who needs it you have appreciation for your class year, that's even better! much luck and apology accept for "My Shini, My hamy" I miss it ya know... so when ya can update either fic!
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Title: ch. 15
Reviewed By: Ibuki On: October 15, 2004 01:49 CDT
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Wow Duo is really angry at Heero. Great action scene in this part. I think Heero might just start to realize that Duo is not exactly human. And I really want to know why he needs to get to wherever he's trying to get to. Enjoyable story! Would like to see more asap!
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Reviewed By: Ibuki On: October 13, 2004 02:50 CDT
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This is really a fantastic story! I read the whole thing in one sitting. ~will have difficulty getting up for school tomorrow~ Your Duo feels like the real Duo and not the fanon kind. And I enjoy seeing Heero in a new light in here. Good work! And I wait anxiously for the rest!
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Reviewed By: priscel--- *purrs* On: October 08, 2004 21:43 CDT
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WAAA!! I had so hoped they wouldn't be spotted but I guess Duo needs to start rubbing and blowing on that rabbits foot like a treasure troll itching to be touched! I knew relena was an idiot, Heero left L.E.F.T. but of course in the pretty pink princess's head that equates to him being kidnapped cuz he would never leave her *gags* I'm so happy he got away from her! I wish though that he had called home after the frist day to tell his family he's getting an early start on his social studies project, that would have helped disspell any craziness from Relena. So Duo stole a kiss from Heero while he was sleeping!! (^_^) Go Duo! i don't blame ya when you have an extermly kissable... delectable *cough* Heero sleeping and looking yummy! More please!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 19:18 CDT
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*claps her hands* i'm glad there's more to come! Man... so is that Heero knows that Duo's part feline but doesn't call him a Neko out of repect that he isn't only a neko but human?! Heero seems very sensible and damn is Duo still driving with his hat stapled to his head? last chapter when he told the now much dead prejudice bigots that his mother and whole family died to protect him, and his passionated desire for heero not to remove his hat ...is the prior incident hinting that he didn't leave the dead place that he once called home unscathed? Oi this is so GOOD!! please update soon!
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Title: Ch.10
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 18:01 CDT
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Oh gods! oh man! couldn't Heero have done SOMETHING!!! Poor Duo!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 17:06 CDT
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hmm 'behind his ears' ok *feels silly* so has both his human ears!... And Heero is really connecting with Duo on a personal level and Duo is so funny. *sigh* I have ten more minutes of reading time...hmm what to do what to do... ONward!
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Title: part 7
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 16:38 CDT
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hmm... Heero's bright, do you think he figured out that Duo is a Neko? and which ear is that he's showing when he puts his hair behind it?! I keep thinking right for some reason. Relena must have caused all hell in looking for heero and probably has maded up outragous stories about him being kidnapped or held for ransom.
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Title: part2
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 12:44 CDT
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oi what happen to Duo? why did he change so suddenly when heero touched the hair he hid? why did he decide to chance the kiss with the hee-babe? more to read YEA!
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Title: first chap
Reviewed By: priscel *blinks and scratches the back of her head * On: October 04, 2004 08:32 CDT
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'...when she came on to him asking for a sexual relationship, there wasn't an objection either. It simply didn't bother him as long as it stayed within the perimeters of his schedule, his plan for a simple, successful life. ' Oi is he serious?! he and relena did the deed, *sigh* wish he met Duo or one of the other boys sooner. In summation, Uncounsciously and consciously unawares to him, heero is screaming save me!! I gotta go get my tatoo!! yippie! so I'll be back to catchup soon!
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Title: NOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 15:40 CDT
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but hey I like. I enjoyed reading it. I hope that there is more to the his story. I love the way Heero just leaves relina and go of Duo, their the perfect couple in all fanfic these days, but I really must know if Heero and duo get to stay together after he know the one little secret? or does Relena get him back? Keep writing please?
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Reviewed By: ~Esukafruone~ On: September 25, 2004 00:33 CDT
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I love this! Very dark and disturbing torture in the last part, which had me shedding tears for poor Duo. This story has been on my list-to-read for a while now (I have you down on auto-notify) but I just started reading it this week. Am I glad that you updated right after I finished the last chapter! phew!*relieved* Otherwise I'd have lost sleep over the cliff-hanger. I really like your AU Heero and Duo! I look forward to the next part! I bet we're going to find out about Duo's secret soon!*excited*
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: September 24, 2004 10:35 CDT
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An excellent story, unique and well written. I'm almost shocked that there aren't more reviews for this, but this site seems to have readers who are a bit hesitant to comment. Go figure. Anyway, don't let the lack of reviews keep you from continuing. More people appreciate the story than you know.
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 21:27 CDT
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::gazes around:: well, I'm surprised no one's reviewed yet. ._. ... Anyway, ^^, this story is going along very well, and I'm guessing that you plan on updating every 4 days, huh? I just happened to notice the pattern on accident...I'm not usually clever like that....This story is another fine example of the great work that you do, and I can't wait for you to update all of your stories sometime soon...(or else the little Heero's and Duo's in my brain will never leave o.O;;;;)
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