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"A Tale of Two Worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ]
 Reviewed By: mojopp  On: June 30, 2005 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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oooohh, you write well! And I love the story so far! I wanna guy like Kouga...or at least how you describe him ^.^! AH! ok, great story!
 Reviewed By: Ardinae  On: June 27, 2005 16:58 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Don't tell me Inuyasha mated Sango so now she's alive. If there was ever a couple I detest it would have to be that one but then I'm don't like any other woman with Inu but Kagome. LOL I'm such a bitch sometimes. Anyway it really is a good story. I'll keep reading it just because I find Kagome's insight to her own strife interesting. Keep up the good work no matter what the pairings are. =)
 Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2005 01:26 CST
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I really like this story so far. Do you plan to finish working on it? Hope you update soon!
 Title: ugh just give me the next one!
Reviewed By: kaoru_kira [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2005 22:09 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
God this is long but it is worth it.I want he next chapter quick, and whats with the hint at it not being inuyasha aww man. but the story is good keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2005 19:34 CST
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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Wow, really interesting. I wonder if Eri is seeing Hojo..it just seems like she sends off weird vibes or something :-) But really, what a cliffhanger...I want some more of Inuyasha! And was that just a dream she was having or was it something more....Hope there's an update soon!
 Reviewed By: KHam2003 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2005 15:15 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Man, I've really enjoyed reading your story & I usually don't like Kagome/Hojo stories...I can honestly say I don't know who I want Kagome to end up with...just hurry and update!!
 Reviewed By: Duchess D [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2005 21:33 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. This is awesome! I wasn't too sure if it was my "cup of tea" when I first saw it (Hojo....ugh. That's a general rule for me lol.) but... HOLY DAMN! This story is really good. The only complaint I have is that once chap is harder to read since it's all bunched up... but whatever that's not that big of a deal. Update soon please!
 Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 23, 2005 21:06 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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....holy hell woman...this is awsome. i have so much to say about it...let me find the right place to start. the plot. the plot is a freakin work of genius. teh way it starts out and then wraps around everything. the unexpected yet proclaimed betrayal of Kagome by Inuyasha (or was it) to the death of her family and destruction of Kagome. Hojo's existance is a nice plot twist along with a great antagonist. one boy so sweet and innocent can only be so for so long. i love how you stuck him back in at a great angle. the only thing i didn't get in the plot was Kagome's disposition at the beginning. it was almost as if she had been attacked before the others...hmm. okay, characters. you nailed Kagome perfectly. every nook and corner that she could hide anything thing in...every doubt and fear, desire and need...you nailed it all. as for Souta, i love the person you made him into, even if he was a little foolish to go to Kagome's job and mention InuYasha. in your story, he was only 4 years younger then our kags, so he had to catch on that she was in love with him. that was the only low blow i caught. the way you used the language to compose your thoughts, absolutly wonderful. it flows so beautifully...so perfect in its context. the story is amazing in its context and plot. i feel so bad for Kagome, you actually pulled tears out of me, which isn't always an easy thing to do. i love it. i hope you plan on writing more because this is AMAZING.
 Reviewed By: sesshyz koiishi [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 26, 2004 07:46 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ugh! it was getting good. U've bn giving us hints that Inuyasha will appear and when je finally f***ing duz, u do a cliffhanger! Ughhhh........I don't kno how im gonna take this, hopefully u'll update soon or i'll lose ma insanity and kill u!
 Reviewed By: KowaiiMusume [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2004 08:31 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Great story! Update soon.
 Reviewed By: Leiko_Kane [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2004 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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so far i really like your story; its very original. keep updating as much as possible and as soon as possible.
 Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2004 18:03 CDT
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Interesting story, please continue
 Title: boring my ass!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2004 00:04 CDT
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I didn't expect to like this story. I was wrong! I love the way you're slowly spinning this beutifuly writen fic. This is a uniqe & intriging version of the Inu tracks down Kag in the future plot. I can't wait to see if my theories are right. Thanks for shariing this inspired tail if love lost & found. Smittin
 Reviewed By: shywaii_gurl  On: August 06, 2004 01:58 CDT
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woo hoo im first to write! aww its pretty boring but its good.. try to make some more excitement! heehee dont make me fall alseep..

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