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Title: ok
Reviewed By: anarie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I may that was so cute I think a good story would be Kiba and Tsume what do you think?b mail me at anarie5@hotmail.com and let me know
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Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 13:35 CST
Comment/Review:
WRITE A LEMON/LIME SCENE SOON!!!! Must have Kaiba/Toboe action soon!!! >_< Can not live without it!!!
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Reviewed By: crimson mist On: August 27, 2004 23:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, this is soo cute you must continue! That is an order! I love Kiba andToboe pairing so please write more.
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Reviewed By: DarkLight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...that was so cute! I really liked it. You hit Toboe's personality straight on. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kaja On: August 07, 2004 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice,please if you will write more.
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Reviewed By: Maggie On: August 05, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah...geez you need to write another 10 chapters or something...ooo...that was a good first chapter...kayla, i loved it!! keep writing! --Mags
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Reviewed By: Coke And Pancakes On: August 05, 2004 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Rather enjoyable if I do say so myself. I about fell out of my chair when I was going through the kissing, smutty, murrrahhh! ~cough~ Sorry..ermm..moving on. Anyway, the reason why I gave you a 7 for the style is because there have been several Wolf's Rain stories relating to the same format in which you used. All the rest seemed uber spiffy. Kiba's character seemed a little weak but I can see what you were going for. The creativity did not get as high of rating because it is almost to the point of clicheness. >.< Thats just my opnion..and now I'm blubbering so I'll just stop right now. Um, great fic! I was giggling 99.9% of the time. And a fic has to be pretty damn good to get that kinda reaction from me. ^^
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Reviewed By: Lanna On: August 05, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was absoloutely fabulous. Very nice writing style, good charecter styling. Read it.
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