| "More Than Just a Crush" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: mangadrawer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 13:58 CDT
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I won't be writing for, like, a week, 'cause I wanna play video games!! Yup, I'm a video game freak. And of course there's school... >_< Sorry everybody! Thanks for reading! Bye bye!
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Reviewed By: black_leopard_9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 22:44 CDT
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Awwww! Awesome chapter man! soo cute-ness! Up-date soon! Rock On!~Black Leopard~
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Title: Whoa...
Reviewed By: -Drifter- Erin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THAT'S A GOOD STORY GO YOU IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY UH-HUH ALLRIGHT (Please excuse Erin today her sugar lvls are high right now so she'll be very hyper) Erin's Siggy: ~*A Drifter is a person always looking for fourtune and adventure No matter what the cost*~
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Reviewed By: Sparrow666 On: August 14, 2004 18:32 CDT
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*does dance* oh, man. happy place, happy place!! ^_^ awright, go bakura!! *starts dancing again* he kissed me, he kissed me, lalalalalala! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Din, Spawn of Inuyasha (Yes I am Digi12) On: August 14, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE!
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Title: cool!!!!
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 11:07 CDT
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Dude awesome chapter!!!! just not as long.. oh well!!!! Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh 24 On: August 14, 2004 10:32 CDT
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Aww!! ^^ What a cute chapter! That was great! Hmm... will us jumping to concusions cause any problems? I hope not! Please update again real soon! ^^ Ja!
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is cute but i think you should spice it up a bit create a problem or something drama! but other then that this story is wonderful! keep it up
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Reviewed By: Sadeo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 09:46 CDT
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Awwwwwwwwww...so cute! Which is better: blue eyes or brown eyes?! Brown makes you think of rich dark deep chocolate.........*dreamy sigh* But on the other hand...blue is soo elegant..like cerulean..sapphire, pacific....navy, periwinkle..I'm goin' with blue! Ja Ne minna-san! ^O~
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Title: EVERYTIME
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 03:08 CDT
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everytime I see your tittle I always think of that song fro the Princess Daries movie! You know that song "It's more then just a cursh everytime we touch. You know you make fell brand new. Cause there no one esle but you." I like that song. well If I knew that he had blue eyes in the f'en manga I would have not told you the brown eyes thing... b ut when he has brown eye it makes you think of chocolate... well update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 00:05 CDT
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I have to agree with you that Bakura with Blue eyes is way better than the Bakura with brown eyes. I love the fic and think tha tthe kiss wass awsome. It was so sweet unlike the Bakura that I know. Or is more like a Ryou fic? Hey whatever as long as there is some kissing between it than I'm happy. Update Soon.
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Reviewed By: black_leopard_9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soo cute! awesome, up-date soon plz! with cherries on top! ~Black Leopard~
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Title: to lazy to log in
Reviewed By: kuramalvr6/sydney On: August 12, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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holy crap GREAT chapter better than the last anyway update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: unimportant bystander#12 On: August 12, 2004 15:17 CDT
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I like this fic alot especially the part where Bakura kissed me!Update soon,well if you can,I understand if you can't though school sucks T.T,oh well later days
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Reviewed By: mangadrawer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 15:12 CDT
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Thank you everyone for reviewing! It makes writing my fan fiction, so much more enjoyable! Sorry for the late update, I'll try to get the 4th chapter done faster! School's gonna be starting for me, so I probably will only get in one chapter a week. >_< Well, thank you again for reading, and I'm out. (I only reviewed on my own fan fic cause I wanna read the reviews I got!!!
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