"Unseen Battle" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: *Grins* See? I can't change my name now... :P Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 20:19 CST Comment/Review: Aw... another fight between Vegeta and Bulma... and Vegeta lost... I think... That going to leave a mark on his pride... Yup. Why is Bulma laughing? O_o...
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Title: LoViNg iT Reviewed By: uR_FaN On: November 07, 2004 15:52 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow you got to keep this story going , i like it... especially with all the twists and turns that come with it. keep it going mate
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Title: I should stop change my name... Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 26, 2004 21:52 CDT Comment/Review: Yeah, I was Veglma, A Insane Reader and Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin...Now I am just plain Veglma...Don't worry this is the last time I will change my name, Sorry if I cause any problems. Yeah, this chapter answer my questions. *Watchs the fight* Woohoo! ....Aw man! I cann't decide who I should cheer for...*Reads the aftermath* Oh...It well be so fun to read what will happen when they meet again. {The spelling mistakes time} You spell calm as clam...and that all spelling mistake I can find right now. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Hm.... Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: August 24, 2004 22:50 CDT Comment/Review: I wonder why Bulma want to talk to Vegeta in private for? Oh well we will find out in the next chapter...I think. Wait a moment! Why was Cole happy to see Bulma glare at Vegeta for?(why do I think miss something?)
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 14:37 CDT Comment/Review: Wow, i don't believe i've ever read anything like this before. So you have this all planned out already huh? I can't wait to see what u have next! Great story so far. I like it alotz. I wonder what Bulma wanted to talk to Vegeta about. So the lendgendary and Almighty is one person right? Was there a thing going on btw Bulma and her gaurd or was it just me? Anyway, Great job on the story! And keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 16, 2004 18:39 CDT Comment/Review: Bulma is 977 years old!?! Yeah, It not the usual B/V indeed.
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