| "Sleeping with the Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 224 ] |
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Title: I got ur back
Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love your fic and the bitch who is trying to get credit for your work well i just flamed her so dont worry but please dont stop writing this story its really got and one of the only Nar/Kag fic i thought is worth reading. So Dont Stop PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl *not logged in* On: March 25, 2005 00:47 CST
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Please dont discontinue this PLEASE!!! I wrote her a review telling her about it, so hopefully everyone else will start to do it too. Just please dont discontinue though.
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: March 16, 2005 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, a little... well sorry but... *yawn* boring. I know I usually give good reviews, but I'm just being honest, though I understant the whole 'building the plot' thing, I couldn't help but feel that you tried to distract the readers with other happenings. Like what? I'm glad you asked! This building romance and feelings between Miroku and that girl... I forgot her name, as well as the connection between Sango and Inu Yasha, almost if you'rer planning something. Humm, could it be that you're setting up the stage so that when everyone finds out that Kagome and Naraku are lovers it won't be so bad cause they'll share the love of another? Ooooh.... the plot thickens. I still love your work and this story, but although it may be difficult, even a conversation between the main characters (Kags and Naraku) would appease me since the whole romance between them has been put at a halt. I'm just looking for the sparks between them is all, even a suggestive look passed between them would do me good! Ah, well enough complaining. I can't wait till the next chapter, till then, keep up the good work! -Kinoko
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Title: youkai obsessed
Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 04:28 CST
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OMG poor Naraku!! (ack …hits Kagura on the back of her head) I belong to a Naraku/Kagome group, I will send this link for this story to them. I have to say its one of the best ones out there. I have linked it many times to others who adore Naraku as I do. You have done a wonderful job keeping him in character. And making him lusty and sexy as hell as well!!!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 18:30 CST
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A kag/nar fic that hasn't degenerated to a pwp? That actually has a plot? One that doesn't suck?! Next thing you know, people are going to be writing believable IY/GW crossovers, or there will be mass revolts when someone kills off Kikyo! I thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing a fic featuring this much-neglected pairing. Granted, I have a hard time imagining what the group is going to say when they find out about this little affair. I don't see sango just sitting back and saying, "Oh well! So he slaughtered my entire village, and has turned my brother into a souless, murdering zombie. As long as you're hapy Kagome..." Yeah. So, it looks like you have your work cut out for you. But, I have the utmost confidence in you. Oh yeah! There was one line in this chapter, (last chapter?) that was just pure Kagome through and through: "Naraku might be evil, but even evil people need someone to talk to every now and then." I love it! Evil people have feelings too! While you have been almost forced to make Naraku a little OOC in order to keep him from just killing Kagome w/in the first two paragraphs, I think you have done a wonderful job of keeping the rest of the cast very IC. Not sure I'm a fan of where you're taking the Inu/San thing, since i'm a die-hard san/mir backer. However, i won't let something as trivial as that keep me from seeing where you'll take this fic. It has enormous potential, and i can't wait for you to update again. Well, i'm out of characters, so Ja!
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Reviewed By: Colshalin (not signed in) On: March 04, 2005 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I do wish you'd update more often though. ;-) (I know, I read your excuses) I like what this is building to, and I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome finds herself in the middle of the situation with Kagura and Naraku. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl *not logged in* On: March 04, 2005 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 02:58 CST
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Ok, i never thought i would actually like a Naraku/Kagome ... but i decided to try it after i re-read Secrets of the Shinju and i wanted to read this too. But i think its really good! I really like it! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated, not only that but that you also broke free from the writer's block you were experiencing. I'm crossing my fingers hoping for a lemon between Kagome and Naraku soon to tell the truth, but this new plot is also interesting enough to keep me happy. Thank you so much for this chapter, I can't wait for the next one! -Kinoko
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Title: Chap. 12
Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG.. This chapter was good too! ACK.. except the very last sentence (ack) I love this story!! You have done an outstanding job with Naraku!!
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 00:23 CST
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O_O NOOO naraku! T_T O_O i have grown attached to the badguy. see what a wonderful author you are!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 04:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O,O (Thud) Ohh I really love this story!!! You have done a wonderful job with the way you have Naraku. He's still Naraku, but with a sexy lusty side! Wow!! This story is really hot!! Great lemons too!!
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I was hoping that Kagome would have stayed in his bedroom and at least try to make him feel better after the dream. Oh well... no hentai this time around either :( . Then you got my hopes up again when he had wondered over to Kagome's door, but nope, nothing pointed to any thing between them happening any time soon :( . I really like this pairing, and I suppose that if they didn't do anything in this chapter or the last one it is because you're trying your best to keep them in character, though, this entire story kind of goes against their character (well almost any way). Seeing it in this light, wouldn't it be okay to indulge your readers at least a teeny weeny bit with at least a peck on the lips on Kagome and Naraku's part? Anyways, getting to the point, I really liked these last two chapters, thank you very much for updating them. Please continue the good work and the not-so-long waits between them. ^_^ Get'er'done! (from Blue Collar Comedy Tour.) -Kinoko
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 23:13 CST
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Update as fast as your fingers and time lets you. Geez this is a good fic, I must know more.
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Reviewed By: Inukamisashi On: January 14, 2005 07:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! I've read this fic of yours from the first chapter and its really nice. Um..could you pls notify me too..? Here's my email add: inukamisashi_117@yahoo.com. Keep those fics coming. ^_^
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