| "The Daughter of Tamal The Fire God" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 12:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was pretty good but next A) make chapters longer B) don't bother posting anything if you don't even have much of a story C) update.
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Title: chappie 2
Reviewed By: Shiny Lights (too lazy to log in) On: August 10, 2004 01:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
-_-### it was short. IT WAS SHORT! ;-; i don't like short.... FEEL THE WRATH OF MY PUDDING-STICK-*whacks you, but there's nothing in my hand* huh? where'd my EXTREME JELL-O PUDDING STICK go? oh, THAT'S RIGHT! I ate it! You've lucked out this time... but try to make the next chapter longer please! ^^
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Reviewed By: Fire_Child [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKEY!!! ^_^ keep on writing
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Title: Still with the food thing
Reviewed By: Sunchaser On: August 09, 2004 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I still say Tamal is a Mexican food, or at least Tamal is the way here in Mexico is written. I don't know how in other parts of the world it is writed but in Mexico that food is Tamal without the "e", it's just a cultural fact, don't take it as a flame.
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Title: The Daughter of Tamal The Fire God
Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: Shiny Lights [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG THIS FIC SUCKS!! I HATE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!!! YOU NEED TO DIIIIIIIIIIEEEEE!!!!!!/ Hiei: *walks in* What are you doing?/ me: Writing my first flame. EVER! SEE? I found this spiffy story, and the author is accepting flames! ^^/ Hiei: it's not a flame unless you MEAN it./ me: o.o i guess that makes sense... GOMEN! i actually enjoy your fic a bunch. i was a tad disappointed that there was only one chappie.... v_v UPDATE OR I'LL SMACK YOU WITH MY EXTREME JELL-O PUDDING STICK! IT'S EXTREME TO THE MAAX!!! and it's chocolate to boot! ^-^ update soon!
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Reviewed By: shadow star [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked it.Update soon
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Reviewed By: SunChaser On: August 06, 2004 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Isn't Tamal a Mexican Food?
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