| "The Daughter of Tamal The Fire God" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Uchiha_Ryu On: February 23, 2005 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope u still read yur reviews because if u haven't noticed that e-fiction is gone so just to help. u can always put yur fics on www.fosff.net youfiction.proboards30.com hope to read yur fics soon. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 10:24 CST
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Um...it wont let me load e-fiction.org...can u please try to post it again on mm? i'd really like to read the story
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Reviewed By: iluvshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 04:20 CST
Comment/Review:
What's e-fiction.org?
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Title: HN
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 08:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay! But after your school work u get right on it. Okay...goood girl *gives here sweet snow but Hiei runs off fwith it* o well. I shall through 2000 pounds of pudding on u if your not done in a month.
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Reviewed By: Flame youkai ll [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
pleaz update
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Reviewed By: Shiny Lights (justlazy) On: August 24, 2004 01:31 CDT
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hmmm. >.> I do feel like you're rushing the plot a bit... and by the way, i think you mean the word "until" when you say "int'l" unless the computer is making the story funky... but anyway, i like it other than those two things and i hope the next chapter comes soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: inkheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: inkheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! *chants* SUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARSUGARsugarsugarsugar sugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugarsugar sugarsugar isisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisis goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoo dgoodgoodgoodgoodGOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON ASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAPASAP!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! *stares at sword* wow youre funny!!!! /Koenma: dont mind her shes insane/ ME: insane is niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice /Koenma: oh, and dont forget sugarhigh............../ ME: i love sugar!!! well then please update and i shall review and we will all live happily ever after! luv ya! byez! THE END!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Icey Queen1 On: August 23, 2004 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
To lazy to login, Update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: kuroikitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o I get to pick on Hiei? WEEE *gets really hyper* well can't wait until next chapter and to leave you on this note I have as much patience as Hiei
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Reviewed By: Shiny Lights (notloggedinwhatofit?) On: August 23, 2004 00:49 CDT
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i'm sorry. I was in 8th grade last year... they have NO mercy. and they pile it all on the last week or two before a vacation. *pats back* Try not to get eaten. Eaten people can't update. ^___^ I GOT TO PUNCH HIEI! AND I KNOCKED HIM OUT! HELL YEAH!! I KICK ASS!!!! *jumps around Hiei in circles* I JUST KICKED YOUR A-ASS! I JUST KICKED YOUR- *gets taken away by Hiei* heeeelp meeeeeeee..../ PS: i was almost named Grace... but then my mom's friend named her kid grace so she didn't. ^^
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Reviewed By: kagayaku rei tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 21:21 CDT
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BOOYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *DOES HAPPY DANCE* I BEAT HIEI!!!!!!!!*PEACE SIGN*^-^ YAAY!!!!!!! ARIGATOU GOIZAMASU!!!! UPDATE SOON!! LUUUUUUUUUUVV IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DarkWolfDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL!
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Reviewed By: Kurama and Hiei's lover On: August 17, 2004 10:37 CDT
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Why stop there??? I was liking the story!!! So can you add more chapters to the story!!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
update or i will pelt you with evil toasters of dooooooooooooooom!! ^__^ please and thankyou. oh by the way yer story kicks ass so far. ~_^
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