| "Young Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 02:12 CDT
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very interesting story! how much is Ryou paid for this? does he actually have sex with Kaiba in the end? meet up with Kaiba again? update more soon!
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Title: Me Again!
Reviewed By: zakira06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man I'm just gonna keep giving you a perfect score! I really like your fic. But why oh why are you torturing us! Ahh do update!!! Please!!! >.
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Title: the little kitten!
Reviewed By: Tara-chan On: May 09, 2005 03:23 CDT
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nice story, please continue!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Lytha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and think you only need a part time beta cause I only found a few misspelled words. Other than that, IT WAS PERFECT! Be glad, I'm not the kind of person who complements much. *smirks* You better write more soon OR ELSE! And just because I'm in a good mood, if you still need someone, I could be that part time beta I suggested. Think it over and whatever, but WRITE MORE DARN IT!!!
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Reviewed By: K On: January 24, 2005 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story but PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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Title: Great Chapter!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 23:40 CST
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I'm sorry it took me so long to send a review on this cause i read this awhile ago. I really liked this chapter. I hadn't noticed how much ryou was like kaiba. Okay truthfully how many people could have passed up the chance to sleep with you ryou? Kaiba is not human lol. Poor ryou all that stuff that happend to him he probably needs a hug. *huggles ryou* hope he feels better. Oh sweet kaiba he let him stay. *huggles kaiba* I just like to hug. Well I can't wait to see what happens between ryou and kaiba and what kaiba will do to jones. Please please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 09:45 CST
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*sigh* Ain't your motto the truth! Sorry i'm in a bad mood about men at the moment and am feeling extraordinarily bitter about real life men, I'm giving up for a while and contenting myself with dreams of Seto..hehe. Anyways Adair is def. hot sexy and all of the rest of it! *drool* I can't wait to see the next chapter and I can't wait to see how Seto reacts. Oh and so you know the image that you gave of Ryou offering himself to Seto was sooo hot!! hubba hubba lol.
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Reviewed By: sesshyandkuramasgirl On: November 21, 2004 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeeeeeeeeease u HAVE to update soon! I CANT WAIT!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: November 21, 2004 11:42 CST
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Seto's quite a intresting character, I especially like the BLOODY HELL part, hehehe. Poor Ryou, at least Adair is there for him, I really like Adair, he's quite sweet. Keith is a revolting repulsive pig, as always and Ryou's damn near perfect. Great job, can't wait for more.
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: zakira06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it man! I just love your story! keep going and I can't wait to find out what happens between seto and ryou.!!! good job!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 23:33 CDT
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Wow, great concept for a story! Ryou is so OOC, but that's ok... I love what you've done with him so far. After all, you did say he's been in the business for some time, so of course he's gonna change. Please update soon, I can't wait to see Seto's reaction to Ryou!
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Title: That Was Great!!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 13:04 CDT
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That was an absolutely great chapter and i loved it. Why did Ryou take his hand away so fast? Does Adair like Ryou or something? They would make a cute couple. I loved the dream i thought it was great. Never thought of Seto as the snugguling type. I wish i had the kinda power seto had he just kinda got up said the meeting was over and that was it man that is cool i also loved that part if you can't tell. Sorry about that review with nothing in it my finger hit the enter button. S16: Bad finger bad. Hiei:Baka ningen you can't reprimand a body part. S16: I can and i just did so nah *sticks out tongue* Hiei: Human do that again and you will lose your ability to talk. S16: *mumbles* three eyed midget can't tell me what to do humph. Hiei: What di you say? S16: Nothing at all Hiei-sama. Hiei: Hn thats what i thought. S16: *mumbles* midget. Hiei: Run human *Pulls out sword* S16: I don't think so * uses mind control to hold hiei still*. While i have Hiei trapped I'd like to say Please update soon before hiei realizes that i don't really have any mind powers. *glances around nervously. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: That
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 12:44 CDT
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 05:06 CDT
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Lol hysterical ending, i couldn't stop laughing. But poor Seto, he doesn't even want to see his reflection. Maybe Ryou can change his mind! heh anyways aya for more Adair coming up and he sounded truley gorg in that outfit, damn why arn't men like him real and if they are they're bound to be gay grrr lol. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hidden Flames Burn Deep [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 14:17 CDT
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Update please...I like where this one is going...You're a really good authour and I love your writing. This one I actually like alittle more than Lovers. But both are good,
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Reviewed By: zakira06 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it man! Dude your story rocks!!! Why haven't you updated! Dude I must know what happens next! Please fill me in with the Seto/Ryou goodness! A must read more!!!...Um yeah... great fic...
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 07:39 CDT
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Lol poor Ryou, but i love Adair he's so amazingly cool and oh so happy. I hope that we can see more of him!
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Reviewed By: Nepticle On: August 21, 2004 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really loved this! Poor Ryou though...using inhalents...and working for Kieth. Poor poor Ryou! I really like how you created the setting and the characters and described things enough to give the reader a clue to what's going on while still leaving enough to be imagined. I can't wait till you continue and I wonder how Ryou will act towards Seto. This IS a Ryou/Seto...right?If so then YAY!!! I really like that pairing even if rarely done and had to find. I love the creativity of coming up with this and hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 20:39 CDT
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Okay i really like this story and i think it is great. Okay so ive only read a few ygo stories but i know what i like and this i love. I have to know what happens next. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: BlueMonkeyCrossing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 17:26 CDT
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Cool.Keep it real.[Gives you a pair of sunglasses and runs off]
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Reviewed By: S-sama On: August 11, 2004 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is really good! I was a little apprihensive at first, but this is a really good fic. Update soon please.^-^
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Reviewed By: Curiouskitsune who's too lazy to sign in On: August 11, 2004 20:13 CDT
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The plot seemed to be pretty good so far, nicely-written. Overall, a fairly well-done fic! Don't forget to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 19:43 CDT
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I like this, and I hope that you update soon.
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo this is cool! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 08:24 CDT
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I love this so far and i definatly can't wait for u to update!
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Reviewed By: Houshi_Grl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 01:43 CDT
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Cool fic!Love it!Update soon!
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