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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: August 08, 2005 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FYI This is my first time giving anyone all 10 so you bette feel important!! But serously it is sooooo funny and entertaining I told all my friends about it today. I was hoping Karasu would ask Kurama to live with him but that was unexpected, the way he did it!! It was still cool though, congrats!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: July 16, 2005 02:04 EDT
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i cant wait for you next update!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Ali On: July 15, 2005 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You manage to outdo yourself everytime love. I really enjoyed this chapter, and gave you a 10 in everything again!! I'm glad that everything seemed to work out in this chapter, and I hope that bitch Megumi backs off, tho I know she won't!! In case I haven't told you lately, yours is the best Karasu/Kurama fic I've ever read, and I've read a lot! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 17:52 EDT
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Was I on crack when I gave you my last review or something!? I swear I must have been, because I read Chapter 9 again and there was nothing wrong with it... I feel like an idiot and I do hope you forgive me for it... My brain must have been on over load from all the BETAing I was doing at the time... Anywys I am sorry and now I will leave my review fro Chapter 10. This one was awsome! I enjoyed it very much and it's nice to see that Kurama and Karasu have finally gotten together. Do you know that it was Yu who made me love this pairing? It's true and ever since reading this I have been hunting down Kurama and Karasu pairings left and right. Thank you for getting me hooked, it's wonderful!
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: July 07, 2005 22:19 EDT
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I dunno that I've reviewed before, but I should have if I haven't... I love this story. ^_^ Yuko and Nissho confuse me (and I assume they'll be explained), but the rest is awesome.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 03:08 EDT
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nice update. a lot happened in this chapter. it seems our youko has become addicted to sex yet again. & i loved how they acted when Megumi was around. i seriously hate that bitch, & that was the best possible way to get her back. it was so wonderful! i also liked the parts about Yuko & Nissho. seems the plot is trying to interupt loveland. (that's a weird line) it's interesting finding out about Karasu's past, though, & i'd like to know more now. and lastly, the way of getting Kurama to move in with Raven was great! very funny & something i could imagine Raven doing. great job with this chapter. update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: July 04, 2005 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: July 04, 2005 20:26 EDT
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I have another question. Just what happened to make Krasu go insane and suicidal?
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Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: June 21, 2005 18:38 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating! Eiko-san,U RULE!!!!! It tolk them 8 chapters but they finaly did it!! Please put up the next chapter soon and make Kurama say YES!!!!!!!!!!! 'Kay ^_^
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Title: kenshinjunkie03
Reviewed By: kenshinjunkie03 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very very good story and i agree with what you said in chapter 1 about kurama and karasu. plus, this is one of my most favorite couples and you did a damn good job of writing this. i hope you update real soon. plus, this is my first review on this site and i'm glad that i saved it for you. please, please, please, PLEASE update really, really, REALLY soon^_^V
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Title: the pudding fiend
Reviewed By: SakuraMikoLeeSetsu On: May 27, 2005 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fwee!Sakura bursts with excitement!!! do i really have to explain why i rated what i rated?well.... i dont wanna =P!!^_^ just kidding, im kinda hyper cause i just had 2 6 packs of pudding and i feel happy! i think i have reviewed every chapter....i think.... *shifty eyes* i like the karasu/kurama pair up and you do a really good job writing and i havnt caught almost any spelling mistakes... yet *muahahaha!* j/k wait....noooo! i did what the review banner said to do noo!! i was tricked!!!well... ill stop wasting space on this review & on your review page cause i bet you have like a hundred rewiews!!tootles~ Sakura Miko Lee Setsu p.s please post the next chapter soon so i can bother you with another review! ^_^ oh and did my review turn out green? the review page said i could make stuff green....brocoli is green ... i think.... i should really shut up now... i guess im just trying to waste all the characters... well uh.....*jumps on hiei piggy back style and forces him to take me to the post office to send you pocky cause she loves your story* ok illl be shutting up now ^_^tee hee please dont hate me cause i bothered you with this pathetically long review... oh right... *silence* Fwee!
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Title: Dominic Shade
Reviewed By: Dominic Shade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply lovely dearest, I'm so glad that you've finally updated this fict.! Though...I shouldn't be such a hypocrite...anyway, I'm a little confused about Nissho...was he a friend of Karasu's? And what's this about him owing something to the crow? Will anyone find out about Kurama's job? And where's Hiei? Still in the Makai? I love that you mix languages in this, it makes it so realistic. And I will certainly read your other taboo fict. Good times and rock on, Dom
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Reviewed By: j On: May 26, 2005 08:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for writing this chapter my friend and I have been waiting forever for this. It was so awesome I can't wait to tell her you posted it. If paraphilia is half this good going to work tonight won't be so boring! Again thank you so much for posting this chapter it was great
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 02:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you finally updated! Don't worry I know how it is with school, I have been busy as hell too and may of my fics have been on hold, much to my readers dismay. To tell you the truth thogh, I was a little disappointed by this chapter... I mean don't get me wrong I love the fact that Raven(Karasu) and Kurama finally got it on, but your grammar was really lacking this time around... you may want to fix it up a bit, you know, editi it and then put it up again, cause unfortunatly, this is not one of your better chapters, despite its plot.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (not logged in) On: May 26, 2005 02:39 EDT
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nice chapter. it's about damn time they got together. i'm sorta surprised Kurama didn't know what was going on. i mean, i sorta expected him to have had sex with male demons as Youko. then again, he could have been doing that so Raven wouldn't suspect anything. though i doubt he was thinking clearly enough to do that. great chapter, though. i liked that first part about Raven's 'rebirth', not suicide. update soon!!
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