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Reviewed By: Kine On: February 11, 2005 16:37 EST
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First of all, I'd like to say that I'm thus far enjoying the fic- quite original. Although Kurama is very OOC, it's to be expected with a premise such as this. As for the critique: perhaps you should not force your own religious beliefs onto the characters. The fact that Koenma is the son of King Enma, Reikai's ruler, eliminates the possibility of Kurama being atheist. King Enma, the River Styx: these are religious symbols that he has proof of. That aside, getting upset when an Atheist speaks of religion is simply bigotry. I am not an Atheist- I realize that there are indeed higher levels of existence, as well as lower. There are miracles and there is spiritual justice in our existence. It's just that your logic makes no sense. No one should insult another's religion, but there is nothing wrong with discussion and philosophical debate. A person's views may change if they share their perceptions. It's like telling a Vegetarian that they're not allowed to talk about meat, or commanding a pacifist not to make reference of another's violence. Atheism is a religious aspect, simply because it is the belief that there is no God; it still describes their "religion." It is narrow-minded and insulting to make such a childish claim. It makes you, as the writer, look immature and juvenile. It is, however, a good story, and I'm a fellow Kurama/Karasu shipper. I look forward to reading more; please take no offence to my well-meaning critique.
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Reviewed By: Kristine On: February 02, 2005 17:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing pairing and writing; quite original and incredibly written. I'm bookmarking you right now. Keep the chapters coming!
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Title: Excellent As Always!!
Reviewed By: LadyAli-07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 21:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent as always my dear! I LOVED this chapter just like all the rest. You seem to outdo yourself everytime...I love your style of writing, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! I do hope that this review finds you well, and if it doesn't, I hope that things improve. Take care of yourself, and don't rush to update. ^.~ This story's got me hooked so bad I won't be going anywhere anytime soon.
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Reviewed By: Kyoroxmysox On: January 19, 2005 23:16 EST
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every one is right this story rox!!!i usually dont read au but this one is the shit. write more!!!
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Reviewed By: AyaSnake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, this thing rocks!! i never thought i'd like a KarasuxKurama fic! oh, and EXCELLENT visual at the rave...i loooove picturing Kurama in black muscle shirts and Karasu in fishnet...*drools* Keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: Hollisandcheese On: January 19, 2005 18:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay another good chapter!!!! Keep going you have a knack for this!
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Reviewed By: Yukinachan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome fic...my friend told me i should read it and im glad she did....but...but...i love hiei *sniffle*..AND HE DOES NOT REMIND ME OF VEGETA!!! but ...awsome fic!!!
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Reviewed By: Yukinachan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 22:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome fic...my friend told me i should read it and im glad she did....but...but...i love hiei *sniffle*..AND HE DOES NOT REMIND ME OF VEGETA!!! but ...awsome fic!!!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: January 18, 2005 20:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tok-chan On: January 18, 2005 20:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for chapter 8 ^_~
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: January 18, 2005 17:47 EST
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it was a very nice chapter, and I enjoyed it immensly ^^
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Reviewed By: Daire Floresta [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so awsome that i will be reading it multiple times. This is one of my most favorite fics and i hope that you keep up writing and update soon. antway i love the way you write Karasu cause he is my ultimate favorite character and sadly most writers butcher him, but you don't so it is great. i'll stop rambling now! Ja Ne ~~Daire
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: January 18, 2005 13:22 EST
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I love this story. I hope to find out more of Raven`s past and hopefully more about Kurama`s feelings for him.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 23:49 EST
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Ya know, I think I'll just start reviewing every chapter you write! Why? So I can keep telling you how great I think this story is! You are making me love you version of Karasu more an more with each chapter you write. Would it be wierd of me to tell you that he is my favourite character in this story? Cause he is! Please keep it up, I can't wait to see this finished!
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Wind Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 14:13 EST
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This is a great story, you'd better keep writing. Whoa, Beauvais.. I know a guy with the last name Beauvais and that kind of scared me. *twitch* His name's Rob, but anhew... Good story, it's really interesting! I can't wait to see what happens.
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