| "Halloween Par-Tay" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was one of the stories I enjoyed reading very much.It was nicely written and was real creative.
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Reviewed By: 1 On: December 05, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. no condom. after all, the others didn't use one. who said they were on the pill? no one said anything about them on b.c.p.
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 07:50 CST
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I luv the story!! Please update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: songiesworld (not logged in) On: December 01, 2004 18:35 CST
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I love your story and all the lemons in it. I was ready your one authors note though and I wanted to know if you had ever read Peach Girl. I think that would be a awesome story to write for. Well anyways keep up the good work. Songie ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kari A. On: December 01, 2004 18:20 CST
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3 how about he gets so frusterated he rapes her
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Reviewed By: Rues_Vides [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 22:01 CST
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Reviewed By: 1 On: November 30, 2004 21:59 CST
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: November 29, 2004 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!!! i think miroku was the best!!! plz make more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 (not logged in) On: November 28, 2004 14:54 CST
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Please update soon! I have to agree with you, I hate Kikyo too. Kagome is soo much better for Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: swordgirl_amy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best lemon stories ever! I totaly love it! I hope you write sqeuls to this story I would love you forever if you did. I am a tarrible hentai(hehe just like you) I can't live with out my leome stories. And you write them just wonderfuly. Hope you make more and do so soon. I might die if you don't, you know I can't live long if I am deprived of my naughty readins. Hehehe, yeah I am just a bit weird. -Amy-
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEll... It would seem that they got what they wanted, but how will the others (who didn't) react. Hope you are able to update soon! ^.~
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Reviewed By: tigirl On: October 04, 2004 16:55 CDT
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weeelll, i guess that was prety good. just joking, i loved it. you did a really great job, but the characters weren't in character and the were a couple of typos, but other than that, great job! i really liked it. i hope to see more of your stuff soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great job w/ the lemons... i was lost a littel in the beginnning, not sure if it is on my own behalf which is quite possible. but good job, never the less, and props.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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