| "Halloween Par-Tay" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: wowzer On: August 20, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
back again!! i love this chapter! miroku is so funny! cant wait fo rthe partay! okay, kagome/inuuyasha, sango/miroku, and sessho/rin thats all folks! cant wait! write soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wowzer On: August 20, 2004 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!! cant wait for more! write soon! oo yeah, um/... kagome/inuuyasha, sango/miroku, and sessho/rin, and i dont care about the rest, well cantwait!! write soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: badkid2004 On: August 19, 2004 19:54 CDT
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come on does kag have to.and hurry on the chaps.pppplllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeee!
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me! I like it. You did a good job. Just love the lemons. I think your lemons are better than mine. If you want to put the second part up, Go for it! I'll be there to read it. See ya!
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Reviewed By: ohcomeon On: August 15, 2004 18:59 CDT
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Nice but what happened to kikyo and naraku couple. Also I felt bad for Kagura, Koharu, Hojo, and Kouga
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Reviewed By: LHS_dancecat_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 13:42 CDT
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Title: It's Okay
Reviewed By: LHS_dancecat_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's better than any my lemons.
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Reviewed By: arrrgh. On: August 15, 2004 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you need to add comedy to the genres! very hot!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Total lemony goodness. YAY! Kagome and Inuyasha, Shess and Rin, and Sango and Miroku..Fave couples!! LOVED the whole costume thing. Cute and entertaining..AWESOME WORK! Kudos! *bows down*
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Reviewed By: jj On: August 11, 2004 12:13 CDT
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hahahaha... this was GREAT! gives me nice little mental images! :-P by the way, it would have been a little easier to read if it was separated into chapters, but that was okay, cause it gets annoying having to click for the next chapter great job, and keep up the good work... ... ... maybe continue with an aftermath thing????
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Reviewed By: fukuro On: August 10, 2004 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic was really great.. it was long but i wasn't even bored. you could improve it by making shorter but more chapters. you know? you could divide it. first the truth or dare then the scene with the guys at mirokus place then a solo chappie for inu-kagome,rin-sesshoumaru and sango-miroku... okay that's my review hope you appreciate it... lol...
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 04:42 CDT
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O.O i had no idea inu was that big! *sobs in happiness* thank you for this moment
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good and long, the lemons could have had a bit more detail but what the heck... some minor errors were there but nothing serious... all in all, a good one shot! But, you say this is long? Check out my "Loneliness of the Free Wind" which was meant to be a short one-shot but... well, just check it out!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo this really rocks
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Title: Halloween Rocks
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story was filled with lemony goodness. I love the tradinational couples. And Hojo was hella funny cuz he was so desperate. I also liked how you made the costumes not match. I think Kikyou should have got knocked out, but it was all good. I wish my Halloween would be this entertaining. lol. You rock!
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