| "Keep the Shadows At Bay" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: lo On: September 23, 2005 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this of AFF and now again here. THis is a great piece of fiction. I only with that you could give the readers some closure. If not, it is ok, it was a great story while it lasted.
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: May 01, 2005 11:46 CDT
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I love this story. You have got to update. I MFE't think Saito was talking about Sano when he said that stuff, it didn't sound like something he would say but it fits with the story as the one thing to break Sano down like that. I just completely and totally love every single word. MFE't bother trying to make them more in character, they're good the way they are even if Saito is a little more open than normal. I just want to know more of the story. Have you read 'A Certian Clarity'? Awsome story, I love it just as much as this one. I was looking for this story forever before I found it again and I can't wait to see what happens. Please please update I'm dying from anticipation here! I think having Sano almost raped like that fits with how Saito first reacted and it all flows together really nicely too. If you MFE't update I MFE't know what I'll do, probably write another sad rape fic for some anime, I've read alot of those in the past months and I kind of want to try writing one. It'll never be as good as yours though! Update when you can I know writing such long chapters must be hard and tiring and I'd rather another master piece than something thrown together to ward off the insane reviewers. Thankies for writing this! Thank You. DK;)
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Reviewed By: evean On: April 27, 2005 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update, please!!! Great story and i love your Sano. Good job. Update, please!!!
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 22:06 CST
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Ok, you are certainly building the suspense. Please tell me you haven't abandoned this fic. I love it and really desperate to know what happens next. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: flabr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 19:57 CST
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Your story is really good,but I really fell bad for Sano.I hope things get better for him.Update soon please
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Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 22:29 CST
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update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! update update update! yay! please update soon!!
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Title: Slater
Reviewed By: Dragon's Ocean On: January 29, 2005 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic very much and am looking forward for chapter 4.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 23:46 CST
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Funny how Saito is the only one to be able to get Sano out of his blind rage? *snickers* I stand by my first observation... Saito is definitely the man to help him get through the mess he's in! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Great chap. I have to wonder where you are going. The rapist was caught rather fast, which makes me think that something else is your focus for the story. I'm really interested in seeing what it is. You've got me hooked now and am eagerly waiting to see what you're going to do.
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Title: wow...powerful...
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 20:15 CST
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that was amazing...totally amazing...please update soon because that was incredible! poor sano....poor poor sano...you would never think...hmmm..your a great writer..please update soon!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: November 03, 2004 19:33 CST
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This is a very good Yaoi; its quite sensual and romantic; not just a wham bam thank you ma'm; hope to see more chapters
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 02:44 CDT
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Hot damn, this was awsome! I hope you update this soon... I feel so bad for poor Sano... I think that Saito is just the man to help him through this mess... strong, level headed... Please update this soon, I can't wait to see what comes next!
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Reviewed By: Self_insertion On: October 23, 2004 07:30 CDT
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Amazing! You HAVE to update soon. It's a very, very good read. I feel sorry for Sano, and have fallen in love with Sano. The way they found the rapist was a bit fast, I wanted a bit more tension, but overall, brilliant!
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Reviewed By: Yukiko_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 09:31 CDT
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oh damn, oh my god !!!! this isreally a good fics, even if you don#t have a lot of review (sadly) i love this. continue soon ...
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Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is great. I love Saito/Sano fics. when Saito is actually doing some police work and Sano's helping out! The characterization is excellent, I love how your portraying Sano. He's in character, but at the same time you've given him more depth. Saito is great too. I love the scene when he's warning Sano to be careful. I adore that Sano stuck his tongue out at him! Keep up the great work! I'm really looking forwar to the next chapter.
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