| "Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: June 07, 2006 15:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job! i really liked it and i can see a sequel to it. please write one!
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Reviewed By: Mala.Darkling On: March 20, 2005 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
It isn't horrible at all! It was soooo cute. Then again, I'm prejudiced. I love Toboe and Tsume. In any case, very cute...and other things too. Somewhat cliche setting, but you did it well, and cliches are based on reality, right? ^_^ Nice story.
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 19:19 CST
Comment/Review:
You should do a lemon for this one. I love this pairing. keep it up and you could be one of my favorite authors soon.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
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Reviewed By: brett westley On: November 09, 2004 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh ... that was just foreplay! XD More sex, I say! I like this pairing. I'm working on a Tsuboe of my own & will post soon. ^^;;;;
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Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 13:12 CST
Comment/Review:
oops meant to put 'wanted' not wasted...
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Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 13:10 CST
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this made me giggle! hehe! But who gasped...? Was it Kaiba? I sooo thought you were gonna put in 'Tsume looked up and saw Kaiba looking at the two. Kaiba bowed his head a turned around. I thought you wasted me Tsume...' That would have been too perfect!! ^_________^ ((
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Title: What the Hell ?
Reviewed By: Hiromaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 21:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
What are these people talking about ? That was horrible . What made you write that ? That was rape . I'm talkin priest and alter boy rape ! I'll stick with Inuyasha Fanfics !good -luck !
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Title: Geeeeer-ate!!
Reviewed By: BloodRedtone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! I love TsumexToboe fics! Thanx so much for that treat! **myewing for more** =^^=
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Reviewed By: Gizmo369 On: August 13, 2004 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ^-^ You did a great job writing it
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Reviewed By: Blair E. B. [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. Your story was one of the very few that didn't have some stupid original character. I wan't too keen on the Tsume X Toboe thing, but you completely changed my mind. Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Faye-Faye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Finally a good TsumeXToboe ficcy!! X3 More maybe?? Can you do wone w/ KibaXHige??? XD
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Reviewed By: Moi-IDigTheFuzzyDude On: August 08, 2004 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you. Thank you SO MUCH for actually writing a fic that doesn't involve some obnoxious original character. I thought I was the only one on here that wanted that. Anyway, this was very good. As was mentioned before, it was a bit cliche'. But hey, what's the world without cliche's? I happen to LIKE this one. A lot. ^^ Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: Puck, Lover of love On: August 08, 2004 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write more Tsume/Toboe fics. Bit cliche', but enjoyable. I thought "owari" meant "sit" in Japanese...?
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